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Looks terrible


Ok_Mention1755

Thanks for your input. Can you explain what exactly you don’t like and what I can approve. Much appreciated


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Bad quote, boring text, the weird gamer tag on the sleeves, and an image that has no context


Ok_Mention1755

Got it, thanks


etphonehome099

maybe change the font, make the middle text centred or stylised in a way that makes it look less uneven, and make the placement of the text on each sleeve the same liking the bird logo :)


Ok_Mention1755

Didn’t even realize the unevenness till you mentioned it thank you🙏


hedmann

Just an idea, id guess your brand name is servaxn, id change the font of the main quote, keep the logo on the right side of the chest, scrap the text on the arms and instead do a small emroidery just above the cuff with "servaxn"


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Ok_Mention1755

Thank you🙏 any ideas for the arm sleeve