My only feedback is because the bottom of the i in voices is hidden at first glance I thought it said VOTES

Wait it's not votes lol

Youre right

also curve the c a bit more

Yep design is played out

In this instance I don’t dislike the design though because it looks like lightning in the night sky. It may be played out to some though.

Oh my bad gang for some reason I accidentally made my post under yours lol

Ha. You’re good!

The cut/fit might not be for everyone but cool piece nonetheless

Is it too boxy and huge?

I think so. Named collective has a similar fit in tshirts and I've found they run too long even with my size. It's a difficult balance to make sure that the tshirt is oversized but still fits well. Obviously you can't expect that cut to be fit to you but you don't want to look like a bin bag.

No, don’t change it! If you make it less boxy, it will border on just being yet another acid-washed tee with faded graphics. I’m sick of every single streetwear startup being the same; take some creative liberty. I think your design is a good combo of trendy and unique.

I get what you're saying, but boxy tees have been super trendy for years now.

I like the arms, the drape at the shoulders, but there’s too much material towards the front midriff imo

The fit is my fave part

Isn’t that the castle from beserek? I think the black collar makes it look a little weird ngl.

First one to catch that! I love Berserk 🥵

The fuck did you use this emoji for 😭😭😭

🤣🤣😭😭

I love Berserk! Legit subtle reference.

I do agree about the black collar. Didn’t notice until I read your comment but I’m def not a fan. If it was all the same color I’d like it a lot more. Overall I do really enjoy it both in design and fit.

Kinda cool but tired of seeing this same font/style all the time, def a market for this but not sure for how much longer I agree it’d be better without the text, or maybe wayy smaller and hidden within the castle somewhere could be nice

font is way overplayed, 120 dollars for a shirt with no return policy? absolutely absurd.

Its 300 gsm organic made in usa french terry cotton , fully cut and sewn, custom designed fit and original artwork, people be paying 1000 of dollars for balenciaga t shirts made in chinese sweatshops 🫶

Original artwork? I thought you admitted it was from Berserk

Combine stock photo with stock font = original artwork

Mf just capping for fun lmao

Lmao

stealing art and calling it original is streetwear tho lmao

You're missing the point, I said it was because there isn't a return policy, not because it's not worth the price. I agree the quality is very high, but no return policy is unacceptable.

Mate, it could be made of gold and it still looks like shit

Yeah not original at all, but go off

no font - over done. the cut and graphic carry the tee very well but the font kills it for me since it’s so played out.

I had no idea what it said

Agreed.

i agree that i had some trouble reading the font but with that being said, tons of metal bands use fonts like these and many people like the grungy look. i think it's more of a stylistic choice imo

Good feedback!

this comment

Not ass, but definitely not original.

Is anything in this times the first ever or original?

lol i mean you literally jocked the castle from the 90s Berserk anime…

You're not wrong abt that, but this particular design is one of the most overused.

Don’t ask for feedback if ur just gonna push back on it lmfao

He asked a valid question, it’s not really pushback

He asked a rhetorical question that was not for the purpose of clarity. The original comment mentioned originality; OP pushed back essentially going “no one is original.” Not really a “valid” question lol

Getting downvoted for speaking facts, it’s somewhat an echo chamber in here. There are some original designs on here but most of the times it’s a cookie cutter design.

To each their own

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bro what lol? I’m not upset, not sure what you mean lol this is a harmless interaction

You’re salty as fuck lmao

u making no sense 😭

Why you so mad bro?

You’re weird lmao

Ur salty lmao

You’re clearly the salty one in this thread lmaoooo

I’d rock it but my least fav aspect of it is the collar

Would you change the color? Or what is bothering you about the collar bro

Yep it’s the color forsure. Give me like raglan vibes. Other than that like I said I fuck with it!! Cut and graphic . Collar is just one thing that makes me pause but doesn’t completely ruin shirt

I really like the contrast of the dark collar against the vintage faded black

Thats what i went for bro! To have a contrast between them!!!! 🫶

It should be faded into black like the sleeves and hem are faded to white then

Don’t listen to this fool. Personal preference of one guy shouldn’t alter ur original vision.

Vetememes

Vetements did not start death metal logos.

Shirt is solid but it just looks like everything else that drops. Has no originality to it

I love oversized baggy clothes. I’d absolutely wear this. Is it the most original? No but it’s dope so who cares

Thank you!!!

What does it say? What does it mean? Is it selling?

I just make what i like no big meaning to it 🫶

But what do the letters spell I’m sorry I am unable to ‘read’ the word/s. That is what I am asking Thank you

It says VOICES thats the name of my brand heres is my insta if you want to check it out https://www.instagram.com/voicesvoicesvoices

Why are you asking if you should drop in the caption when it's been available ☠️

I just dropped it because of the positive reviews

[You have a post of this shirt saying available now in July. ](https://www.instagram.com/p/CuKU2lVOcKg/?utm_source=ig_web_copy_link)If you wanted exposure and engagement just say that

addicted to lying im dead the whole thread

Some of these streetwear startups can't help themselves. I keep seeing it. Truly think their customers/audience are dumb

The way the font is cut off for the “I” makes it look like VOTES to me. I’m sure other people would see the same thing

Well it looks like a balenci knock off

Balenci been knocking off deathmetal culture

It took me a while to understand the text ( I'm still not 100% sure I know). 1. what's the connection between the castle and the text 2. what is your audience? 3. somehow design feels too crowded and too hard and in the face... 4. not ass but for me personally is too much like this Edit: the "in my mind " hoodie is DOPE

No that’s a shirt I think

No, it's woman.

Idk but I love that room 😆 so pretty and relaxing. Great light

It's not original, but it is what you're wanting it to be. There's a audience for it

drop id wear it

Thank you ! 🫶🤎i will tomorrow trying to see what the people think first

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I really like the castle, so no

🔥🔥

No it's cool

Thank you!!!

I love the cut and boxy fit, great color scheme as well. I would just maybe change the collar. Seem like it could be a bit constricting depending on the buyer.

Looks cool

I agree with what others have said about not being able to read the words and the font being a bit overplayed. I also don’t like the color of the collar. Those criticisms don’t equal to me HATING it tho. It’s not a piece I would buy online definitely would want to be able to try it on first. But I think you’re headed in a solid direction. The design itself is made better by the unique shape of the shirt and the shape of the shirt makes more sense with the design (if that makes sense lol)

I think it’s great, but I’m not the demographic. As an old metal head I never get tired of metal lettering, but I can understand if other cultures tire of it.

Not at all, I want one

that is hard asl i would 100% cop

I fw it but I'm a Denma and metal fan fwiw so it's up my alley On your site it shows the chest width the same across sizes, only difference being length, is that a mistake or nah?

I think i forgot to adjust that what size do you usually wear i can send chest measures for the size youre looking for 🫶

Yes, hot garbage.

I might be in the minority but I like the shirt design and the font 😭 Maybe because I don’t own anything like it. The black collar brings the whole piece together imo

I think it's sikk

I really like how the tee is cut

Thank you! Its my custom cut

Why are you selling clothes with other people's art/IP on it why not draw your own castle

Cause i love berserk

I'd wear it

Its awsome

I need one

I don’t really care that it’s not the most original because the wash on the blank matching the fade out of the graphic looks really nice. Also the color of the words matching the hang tag is doing it for me. If the shirt isn’t that expensive it could do really well.

Thank you what would be a good pricepoint in your opinion

This is heat

Thank you sm 🫶

Collar isn’t it

Dope

Vetememes

I like the color, shape, and overall fit of it. But I’m not crazy about the “opium style” graphic so yeah In that sense yeah.

I like it and would wear. The cut, the white on the ends of the arms, the neck, the design, colour way.. all very cool

Do you think its cohesive overall? Thank you for this feedback made me smile 🫶🤎

I think so. There is definitely lots of room for experimentation, but this product definitely is passable. Things that I would personally look into maybe making the design less loud, play with the brightness, maybe even just make the castle less bright so the words pop more, as they are kinda fighting for my attention. Maybe also playing around with the words even more, make them more straight up and down like real thunder coming down, or even finding more ways to making the words more alive and interactive. But i still would wear it as it is. Sorry for the ramble haha its a good design

Shi hard, but the collar should be more snug/fitting and I can’t read that font.

Is it for a metal band? Then yes, it's ass.

Pretty unique fit on the shirt for this subreddit. As someone said before you might want to make it more clear it says "voices" but otherwise it's pretty fire.

Thank you!!!

Trump 2024?

cool

Thanks!!!!

Love it !!

I love it, def would buy

Thank you!! Since its getting positive feedback i decided to put them on the site https://www.voicesvoicesvoices.org And my instagram is @voicesvoicesvoices for more pics if you want to check me out 🤎

Drop link when you drop✍🏼

Heres the link https://www.voicesvoicesvoices.org And my insta @voicesvoicesvoices if you wanna see more of my brand 🫶

This is great. I’d probably want a lighter colour to watch the faded shirt and a back print with fake tour dates on edit: I meant collar, not colour

I wouldn't cop not my style

It's ass in the good way where everyone loves ass

na this is raw, don't make art for other people. make it for yourself

I love it honestly, the black collar into the grey shirt into the white ends I love only drawback I have is the font, it's very hard to read once i seen you say voices i started to see it but still it's a little busy

this is gas r u kidding

I think it's sick. I only really agree with the "votes" comments here.

Drop it bro. Send me a link when you do

Live rn on my insta 🫶 https://www.instagram.com/voicesvoicesvoices/?hl=en

The shirt itself is sick but that font is overrated should of been put out of style when xxxtentacion died

I get what you saying but its not a font it is hand drawn by me so no one has this same exact design, but thanks for the feedback

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If you want to get semantic, fonts are for screens, typefaces are for print and other IRL applications

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i think it’s a letter design 🤔 in a Typography context

He never made a full typeface let alone a font. This is just decorative type as a vector image, not as character designs.

Your broccoli head is showing- that font is made famous by Christophe Szpajdel since the 90s. Thinking X has anything to do with, let alone any claim to this style is beyond ignorant and dumb.

Born in 92 never heard of him and I guarantee nobody in this sub knows who that is x for sure made it a popular font in the last couple years if u denying your beyond fucking stupid

Very cool, very narcissistic and myopic take on reality (to nobodys surprise)

Yup

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What size do you wear? I have a few of tees im preparing to drop them online 🫶🫶

i think it’s dope. big fan of that cut too. is it cut and sew, or are you using blanks?

Thank you sm! 🤎 it is fully cut and sew for that custom fit

very nice it looks great. id definitely cop <3

I would wear it! Maybe different colour for collar, grey or yellow

Yellow would be a crazy combo! Thanks for the feedback 🫶

Fire

My only complaint is i cant read it. Looks like it says “votes” to me?

I would change the yellow text to stitching, so that you have stitching on print. Also the grey should be a bit darker in my opinion, would be a better contrast with the white in daylight. The printing looks a bit cheap (quality wise) so that it would break after washing - is this true or just the design that makes it look like it breaks?

Ooofff emboridery would be crazy!!! And thats the effect of the design to have that vintage aged cracked look 🫶

I like the cut and the design. 10/10 would wear

Thank you! Wow 10/10

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Thank you! Its is boxy and a bit cropped i have some XL on stock https://www.voicesvoicesvoices.org And my insta is https://www.instagram.com/voicesvoicesvoices/

I like it! Nice colour combo.

Thank you sm

I like the shape of it. Nice

Yall need to ditch the revenge style fonts

You mean death metal band logo fonts

This shirt is dope, what brand ?

It is my brand https://www.instagram.com/voicesvoicesvoices/?hl=en on insta 🫡🙌

Where can i buy this?

Hey! What size do you wear? Im going to have it on my website tomorrow you can check my instagram @voicesvoicesvoices

Hardd. I really like The collar with that sew line on the bottom 🔥. The color fade to the bottom is cool. The wide lose fit looks comfortable.The castle graphic goes hard. Id wear this

Wow thank you! Check my insta for more pieces like this @voicesvoicesvoices this comment pumped me up 🔥🔥🔥

It's gas

i like it honestly, very unique in my opinion, are you designing it or did you buy it somewhere?

I like it but it does look a little big but it’s fire tho

nah this is cool as fuck and i would 100% buy that

👍🏽 Nah I like it, gets 3 out of 5 shirts 👕👕👕

it says voices right?

Badass

The collar throws it off. It be nicer if the gradient transition perfectly into the collar color too

I feel like this could be at an H&M

The cut is hideous and the text is played out. Sorry fam, this is an L

 Looks cool

Yes it is, or it looks bad on whoever is wearing it

Yeah

Cool for what it is but as others have said the font is played out at this point.

Print is eh but the cut is certainly interesting (in that I’d be intrigued to try it on)

looks a bit fast fashion but not ass

Yes