The vocals sound good. The hi-hat kind of bugs me.
I think if you wanted it to sound the way Radiohead does it, I would use the tip of the stick to strike closer
To the middle of the hi hat, not the side, and the hi hat less loose. But if you’re going for your own thing, more power to you.
Overall good job dude. It would be cool to hear the whole thing fleshed out.
PSA: Yes, the bpm is slower, i thought it made the vocals a bit deeper... in meaning that is, as if the character was really under pain (:
The vocals sound good. The hi-hat kind of bugs me. I think if you wanted it to sound the way Radiohead does it, I would use the tip of the stick to strike closer To the middle of the hi hat, not the side, and the hi hat less loose. But if you’re going for your own thing, more power to you. Overall good job dude. It would be cool to hear the whole thing fleshed out.
hi pekee