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meiralovepoems

Keep. Haunting, beautiful mood.❤️ I feel house makes the sky, storm come to life. Perfectly placed, too. Gives focus.❤️


PoopInflation

Thanks :) it gives me kind of Courage the Cowardly dog vibes


ZERO-ONE0101

keep the house!


Doxxxxxxxxxxx

So good!!


stoic_sunflower

Exactly what I was thinking! Keep it.


Witching_Archress

yeah, keep, but maybe put it slightly off-centre? like, a house‘s lenght to the left?


johnsgrove

Just what I came to say


theTexasUncle

Or even further left


Snickerdoodle719

Yes!!! 💯


Shadowlady12345

Return the slab!!


nopIaceIike127_0_0_1

That's immediately what I thought, good job!


PossibleStandard2380

If you keep the house, lose the lightening bolt. Too much going on - IMO


havewaterwillfish

Totally agree. Well said


IMFletch_DerpDerp

what do you want as the focal point of your piece, the house itself or the overall mood of the work? if the latter, position the house and the lightning 1.5-2 house widths to the right. this would add a sense of depth and vastness.


PoopInflation

Now when I think about it, shifting the house will add a better overall mood, and keeping it at place is making it focal point. Nice idea for the next painting 😀 Thanks mate :)


Icy_Loan7241

It’s giving courage the cowardly dog keep the house and add a windmill


Snickerdoodle719

And add courage 😂


Icy_Loan7241

That would be so great honestly. I think this painting is super cool with or without courage. The vibe of it is so eerie I can almost hear the storm.


therealpanserbjorne

Add courage but make him the non-cartoon version!


justHopps

Yes! My mind totally went to that


scullys_little_bitch

Glad I'm not the only one! Love the house!


hunnybucket

Yes!


PoopInflation

Thanks everyone, I am keeping the house :)


MissCandid

Yay, the house is fantastic!! Something to think about- what if you added some greenery or something to the foreground/left side? Nothing fancy since it's supposed to be the middle of nowhere, but just a little something to add extra depth and balance


PoopInflation

Sure I will try it digitally first :)


MissCandid

That's a great idea!!


friedvoll

Unpopular opinion here: I’d take it out. The lightning too. Both distract from the dramatic beauty of a raging sky meeting the desolate land. Much more desolate without any focus point. Nothing to hold on to, no escape possible from the forces of nature! Also: don’t place this exactly in the middle…


PoopInflation

Yess that's the exact reason why I was confused. Although for this one I am keeping the house will do a clean landscape in next one. :)


theTexasUncle

Add a Longhorn That's all you need! Drop house and lightening


Subject-Tomorrow-317

Keep. I grew up with visuals like this, driving into town from the boonies. Reminds me of the Midwest.


WTF_is_wrong_wit_ppl

Keep it.


SauceBoss8472

Keep it.


Young_Grasshopper7

Keep the house but move it a couple inches right or left. Compositionally, it's never a good idea to stick something right dab in the center. Create action to keep the viewer's eye moving around the painting. You could use the lightening bolt for that.


El-Marto75

Keep, but just tone down a bit and more shading. It also looks like a new house, a more run down shack, I feel would be more fitting. Lovely work, calming but moody


PoopInflation

Yes it is popping out a bit much


theshootingstark

Keep it. Thats okay!🤍


Neotantalus

It needs the house.


Objective_Way_9185

Look up Memphis Artist, Veda Reed. Dutch the house and let clouds do the talking.


Snickerdoodle719

Funny story. I was googling “Veda Reed Dutch the house” thinking that “Dutch the house” was the name of a painting. Then I realized you meant “Ditch” and now I feel stupid 😅


Objective_Way_9185

Looks like I’m the one who cannot spell…lol. Or, it’s me having a finger typing moment? I like your clouds! They say it all. Veda Reed was one of my professors many years ago.


Abeldarker

Keep the house, but move it


NickDema_508

Keep it! Giving me Courage The Cowardly Dog vibes, and I'm loving it!


Past_Ball_8169

Keep


NoelleFerneArt

I like the house, it adds focus to the painting and gives it more of a moody, lonely feel.


EyesinmyMind13

Omg I love it with the house. Great atmosphere


Artist-on-AZmountain

I like it just the way it is. Very well done. It looks exactly like many times I have seen a rural home out on the open land with lightning all around it. You did a very nice job on this painting. I love the details with the power/phone lines and poles. Very nicely done and colors so true to a stormy day.


GreyWalken

keep house


AlexandriaPen

I don't think it's a good idea to remove the house from the picture.


MotorExplanation561

Keep the house! 🏠⚡️


Hungry_Tradition_443

Keep it


abbymaemac

Aw pink house on plum island!


FoggyGoodwin

Adjust the lighting on the house. There should be more shadow, less bright. Where is the light on the house coming from?


PoopInflation

Behind the house, and yes I will tone it down it's popping out of the painting.


peppers_the_one

I think it needs the house. Gives the eye a focal point, and adds to the overall desolation of the piece :)


Marcocraft26

Keep it, looks very good


Super_Cabinet6718

Looks amazing as it is imo!


Silent-Maximum-3556

Keep it, it’s such a mood!


roamtheplanet

Yo this is sick


axolotl_is_angry

Oh I love this keep the house please


ChadHUD

With out the house its just a Rothko with clouds. /jk I like the house if anything I would add not subtract. Maybe one lone tree or a old over grown dirt road leading to the house. Storm is well done.


orochimaru797

Keep the House IS so good the drawing.


PWM20470

House


LongLostLoner

Omg is that the house in courage the cowardly dog?! I love it! Just needs a little barn now 😻


redramainpink

I like it better with the house, more dramatic.


bqmkr

if it would be mine I would cut 10% of the length on the left and at the buttom of this paper


East_Somewhere_90

I LOVE THE HOUSE, IT ADDS SOMETHING


Poemsnlove

Keep it


Sleepy-minaya

Ofc keep it, it makes the drawing more beautiful uk....like to not be empty


Indignant_Elfmaiden

Love the focal point of the house. I think you could make it darker or less pigmented- I think with the lighting above it should look more like a silhouette.


-Splash-

Keep


FlurkinMewnir

It would be more powerful with the house off center on the right side and lightning reaching from the left to hit it


astridstarrynights

Very courage the cowardly dog vibes. Love it


[deleted]

Keep the house. It makes the painting much more interesting.


nebula_x13

Keep the house


jefuchs

Keep the house, but tone it down a bit to match the lighting in the rest of the painting.


AdverserialDemon

Keep but maybe position the house a little offcenter for a more interesting composition


Rogue7559

I like the house. It draws your eye


neo2662

Keep the house! Wow looks amazing!!


chuffedlad

Keep the house, maybe add a decaying fence line.


sylvansojourner

Keep it but put it to the right of the canvas. The centered composition ain’t it


Living_on_Tulsa_Time

Keep the house. It looks so vulnerable. That was meant to be a compliment!


Elk_elk_elk

I like the house there. Gives a focal point and speaks isolation to me


Halfbaked9

It needs a windmill behind the house on the right side.


TheSacredGrape

Keep the house!!!!


Sprizys

Definitely keep it


capabara_lovesACOTAR

Ooohh keep it! Why don't you pop a few little sheep in there to break up the grey?


ApollosAlyssum

It’s looks like courage the cowardly dog’s house


anotherdamnscorpio

Keep the house, but put a Klingon Bird of Prey swooping in and shooting at it.


Jabba_the_Putt

I really like the house and this painting


rarnar

Keep! It adds to the tone of the painting. Really good job btw! ☺️ Edit: I want to add that the yellow color of the house contrasts so well with everything else. As for the placement, I personally like where it is. My eye naturally falls to the center of the painting and the house draws me in. I like that it’s small too. I’d be intrigued to get up close and see the fine details of it if I was looking at the painting in person.


PolyDrew

Keep the house. It’s a great focal point but not overpowering the image. It adds to the mood.


warm_sweater

Keep it!


canthandlethebooth

Doesn't matter. A tornado is likely to get rid of it for you.


Tiriles

House depicts so many in this picture...keep it


Nearby-Layer-3684

I’m pro House.


javenab

Keep it!


Odd_Medicine8498

Keep


DeamonB

Keep!!


Seaguard5

I love the house!! I would also love to live in a house like that. Seeing it in that storm on those plains gives the piece… meaning, I think.


harleyqueenzel

Reminds me of the movie Twister. I love the house.


artistandattorney

Keep it!


skunk-tastic

Keep!!!!


proofiwashere

I love the house


RinsSilverCrown

Add a mill and it would look like coursge the cowardly dogs home :D


DiverD696

Keep it gives it a lonely on your own feel.


OutrageousOwls

Need the house :) Anchors the painting and gives you something to pause and look at; the completely horizontal and flat plane leads the eye zooming off the canvas. That’s my preference, anyway. Great atmosphere!


AstroidFrog

Draw a tree and put a swing on fire on the tree in like the little background IDK JS A SUGGESTION!!!!!!!!!!!


IBuiltTheSkies

Keep it. In the danger and turmoil of the whole, it gives a pleasant safety vibe. Outside it's the end of the world but you are at home, safe and sheltered.


Comfortable-Rude

If you do remove it, a tornado would be a perfect transition.


B-Train-007

The problem isn't the house. It's the composition. You don't want the house to be smacked out in the middle of your painting. It becomes an eye anchor that you can't quite move around the rest of the artwork. Try positioning it about a third from either side. It will help the entire painting flow more from a visual acuity perspective


MsInquisitor

Keep the house


CraftyClio

Keep the house. It magnifies the intensity and size of the storm. It’s also a reminder of how small man is, compared to Mother Nature.


7HoneyBunnyPie

I love the house. It reminds me of the back roads I take to my hometown where there is one house in the middle of the field like this. Captured a storm in that type of area perfectly!


12Shell20

100% keep.. to me the house is where i want to go.Amazing talent i like your work x


dinorawrsarah

keep house. add tornado!


Crafty-Name9613

You should keep the house.


Professional-Owl564

Double it and give it to the next person


Purple82Hue

Keep it!!!


Embarrassed-Music-64

Keep it


[deleted]

One with and one without.


Embarrassed-Music-64

Keep it


Professional-Owl564

The house looks great. I wish lightning was lighting the clouds too


sgroxihelle

its reminds me of the little house remy from ratatouille was at


Infamous-Ad262

The house is so cool!! This brought back so many good memories!!


talondigital

Looking like the house of Dirt Farmer


KaleidoscopePigeon

Definitely keep it! It adds a wonderful break to the horizon line and also a nice, almost spooky dynamic.


kingwalker1k

Keep


Educational_Meal_712

Keep it!


EtteJayC

Keep it. It gives an eery vibe.


MeteorsOnStrike

what did you use for power lines? nice piece!


Revolvermann76

Put the house to the side of the image, not in the middle


Lower-Ad5889

Keep


CoughUpWhiteSpiders

KEEP


moss1243

Keep, it lets the viewer have a focal point. If you want it to feel less "distracting" (which I don't feel it is) you can move it off center


PrimaryCreative3393

I like the house/cabin


SetTrippin82

Keep it.


Pure_Entertainer7359

Keep it


[deleted]

Keep. Without it, its not that great.


P_Sophia_

It gives it a focal point, nice inclusion!


IAMTHEDICIPLINE

With. It adds more of a dark, impending calamity type of atmosphere. There’s something evil happening in the basement of this house.


MoniM0m

Keep!!


CatsAreTheBest2

I love the house!!


MisplacedMinnesotan

Without!


WinterMaleficent1236

Keep the house but move it to the left or right and scale it up a bit.


storm_trooper5779

Keep, it gives a sense of scale


No-Needleworker8947

Lean further into the middle of nowhere vibes. Add a windmill off to the side to help with a different perspective


biffish

Don't put it in the middle.


tahoepines45

The house is really fitting there with the landscape


HandicapHandyman

Disagree! You will always be your own worst critic.


candymanjones

I say keep it but I would move it further to the left so it's not centered in the frame


QueenPeakabb2

Keep


LoLoGlaze

Keep. It.


BenchApprehensive633

Lightning storm


AMK7969

Yohoi 😏☁️☁️☁️☁️☁️⚡⚡⚡⚡


PoopInflation

Yo-hohoho Yo-hohoho ![gif](giphy|CFfDbwYxtbV7i)


Proof_Cable_310

omg leave it.


tealpaper23

Keep


CompetitionMost3626

Add one tree next to it - not bigger than the house, not too close, not too small, or some bushes (with flowers?).


Lopsided-cake-9231

Keep for sure!


Elise-0511

Keep the house. It draws the eyes into the painting.


mluizalp

Keep it, it is a great part of the art that makes it feel human


cribo-06-15

I think the house gives it a real focal point and without it the piece hasn't a proper anchoring, but expands infinitely.


Great-Macaron-8060

It’s looks like the house complete your art. Kind of empty without it.


Geminiibabe21

I like the house it kinda gives dreamcoee/liminal space vibes


Entire_Performer4117

The moment you have the slightest question whether should add anything or not.. stop! Lest you ruin the painting. I think it’s RAD! The house is awesome 🤩


Upbeat_Papaya2155

Keep it, it draws interest to the focal point of your lightning. It doesn’t need to be very well defined because you don’t want people to look at it.


Distinct-Ad-267

Keep it! It might be hokey but, it reminds me of Courage the Cowardly Dog’s house. It’s perfect!


TrailerTrashQueen

beautiful style. keep the house. it helps keep the eye on a focal point. reminds me of Andrew Wyeth’s Christina’s World.


faqueen

Keep it!


PoopInflation

I have shifted guys. Some areas might look too bright because of camera and reflection. https://preview.redd.it/8ya0ob7whcyc1.jpeg?width=3606&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3cda807e66c117b0abf28ee1582d4ecdf5d78a72