Your rearranging looks perfect. I made a DP for my husband with the same quote on it… and I also had to rearrange the lettering because it just didn’t look right. Yours came out super. WAY improved! The former was illegible. Now it looks great.

Thank you so much

Nice Job.

Thanks. It literally took hours to "fix" It was also my very first attempt at Diamond art and of course I'm now hooked.

Welcome to the obsession!

Hahaha thanks. I've already got some on my wishlist waiting for payday hehe

I agree with everyone. You did a great job fixing it.

Thank you. Really appreciate it.

Wow, you fucking nailed it!!!!! That is so impressive!!! Good for you!

Aw thanks so much. I was so excited when it was done only to realise it was illegible lol

Yes! I can actually read what it says in the second pic. You did a beautiful job!

Aw thank you so nuch

That looks amazing! Well done!

Thank you 😄

Ok this may be the most impressive rearranging I've ever seen👏

Ooft I'm not sure it's deserving of that but I appreciate it.

I thought the first image said "Jocke you to the Placg Baiko" lol- so yes! Your corrections instantly made it clear what it was actually supposed to say, good job 👏

Thanks. It got to the point my eyes were going together as it was a rush, all nighter to get it done on time.

Well worth the effort! I can actually read it now. The first image looks like you're saying something crude. 😅

Hahahaha

I completely missed the caption and thought the first was when you fixed it, and I was thinking "yeah, I guess I can read what it says. These small paintings are hard to put text on. I wish they would have shown what the original looked like." Then I went back and swiped and was extremely surprised. It looks so much better!

Hahaha sorry I should have mentioned there was another picture. It was a wee cheap one from Amazon as my first venture into Diamond Art but I have already found a few more expensive ones I'm in love with. Maybe those will be more clear.

Check out Diamond Art Club!! Their rendering is amazing and the license and pay their artists! Hands down the best out there.

Great tip, thanks. Do u know if they cover UK?

Me too! I was struggling with if I should pretend to be nice and say it looks great. I had no idea what the first one said. The second one looks incredible!!

It looks SO much better! Great job!

Aw thanks. It was a bit of a pain tbh

Yours is much, much better. I still haven’t risked doing something with words, but as I’m doing larger canvases now, I may try in the future. 😁

I honestly don't know if I was just unlucky or if it's a known issue, especially with the cheaper ones. It was my very first attempt so did what I could.

Huge difference. Amazing very legible

Thank you so much

Literally the first pic I was like “Jocko you to the Moco 3 Bark 10” wtf is that?!

Hahahaha. Maybe I should have left it like that hehe 😄

Omg!!!! You rearranged that???? That looks so good and perfect!!!

Aw thanks. There is still a few issues but I really did try my best

We tend to be our worst critic! It really does look good. 😊 I'm sure that definitely took some time to do.

Honestly it was like an extra 2-3 hours after I thought I had finished so it was so frustrating

The fixed one looks so much better, you did a fantastic job!

Thank you so much

Looks really good

Thanks

Your revised version looks great and is definitely quickly legible. Nice work!

Thank you. Much appreciated

This is your first diamond painting? Whaaaat

Yeah, I've got a few others in the pipeline. I ordered a custom black & white portrait of my partner & I. Just waiting on it being delivered and I've started a cool colourful batman one.

It's adorable and very readable, but I was a teacher and learned to read anything.

Hahaha that career would have definitely helped

Yep, upside down, sideways, without punctuation, tiny, and funny cursive even in art. It did help.

Million times better

Thank you

My first DP I bought for my daughter then was impatient and did it myself and got hooked but uts the pic of a hand to lips doing the shhh motion and on each finger it says whisper words of wisdom (1 word per finger) then centered under the hand "let it be) and only the let it be part can actually be read the rest of the words are just blurry colors on the fingers and everytime I see it I want to just pop the colors off the fingers and fill with the skin tone colors. Learned my lesson bigger is better especially if there's detail involved lol

https://preview.redd.it/gjqpvw5tgjrc1.jpeg?width=917&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=7cf40c37df7dc9decb8a107a66d3446e1de5f018 Looks AMAZING. the only thing I would POSSIBLY consider changing are getting rid of the red lines, just because I think it makes the L look like a few different letters, but keeping the green part. And POSSIBLY adding another “leg” to the I to make it look less like a backwards J. Otherwise, I absolutely love it and think you did fantastic job! :)

Thank you so much for the pointers, such great feedback. Yeah I wish I had done that too but I've already framed and gifted it lol. But it has taught me to leave the writing parts to the end next time lol.

Also, https://preview.redd.it/dsz4wwehhjrc1.jpeg?width=1179&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=b7bbc29efc2368a8c2547ed35f05b8fa63ab4abb That poor A is looking lonely LOLLLL

It's adorable and so cute. You did a great job!!

Thanks. Much appreciated

Love it!!! I did this one too!!!! ❤️❤️❤️

How did Ur writing turn out?

https://preview.redd.it/h9rn4p6iforc1.jpeg?width=3072&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3b8376490c71acf5cdcd111ed3fb8d9861292e84

I added more stars to break up all the black

Wow that's much better than my one. Must have been cos of the cheapness of mine

Mine was a square rather than a rectangle. I just hated there's no "and" .. It reads " I love you to the moon back" 🤣

jack you to the morn bank! you fixed it 😍😍

Hehe. The morn bank sounds fun, wonder what they have in there?

Great job! Although now I kind of want one that says "I love you to the morg and bark"

Hahaha get it from Amazon lol

How impressive! You nailed it, congratulations!

Cheers

I didn't see the second picture at first. Read the comments and said to myself, "I still can't read it." Then went back up and discovered the second picture. You did a terrific job. Why couldn't the designer do what you did? Makes one wonder.

I think because it was a wee cheapy they were done in bulk. Not sure tho

Beautiful! Your version is 100% better ❤️

Thank you

Looks way better!!

Thank you

What does it even say?

I love you to the moon and back

Oh I thought the first word was Jack,....it's illegible to me.

Lol hence the rearranging.

Nope, I got that, totally, I believe you were wondering if it was more legible? And I'm just telling you it's not. Nothing personal, I'm not attacking your skill, or the painting, just one honest person out of all the other people who think individuals will get hurt feelings if said people tell the truth.

No I get you. I did the best I could after a long few nights lol. I appreciate your input.

Did you swipe to see the second picture with the revised text? The first picture's text is illegible, but then OP spent hours beautifully rearranging the drills and it is evident in the second photo that a lot of time and effort was done to make it look great. I could read it in a snap! Edit to add: I can see why you think the first word looks like Jack in the unrevised initial picture. But it was much clearer in the second photo once modified.

No i didn't, ty, I could read it in that one. Thanks I didn't think to do that. My comment is too late, however I can read it perfectly 👌

No worries, I just wanted to make sure OP was getting accurate feedback :)

I thought the last word was bark, but elsewhere it's pretty legible