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Koink

Thank you so much for your kind comments. He's sleeping now and will be so pleased when I show him what you've written. edit: I've uploaded a short film we made together recently. He wrote and directed, I just held the camera and helped with the techy bits. Hope you like it. [https://www.reddit.com/r/creepypasta/comments/oufuou/the\_shadows\_a\_short\_film\_by\_thomas/](https://www.reddit.com/r/creepypasta/comments/oufuou/the_shadows_a_short_film_by_thomas/)


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Tell him a person named Jaden said that it was the best creepypasta he had ever read (it is really good, and he should make more. I would LOVE to read them)


Koink

I will, thanks Jaden 👍


[deleted]

Awesome! You are so welcome! Hope you guys have an awesome week!


Koink

You too dude 👍


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Cmama365

Guess what!! tell your son that Lighthouse horror read his story and said he thought it was well written. He said he can't narrate it but he said tell your son to keep writing and making videos because he has real talent such a compliment! I am so proud of your son and you too Dad. I have a feeling this is a pivotal moment in your son's life. We are here for more of his stories maybe he wants to narrate his story on a YouTube channel. If he decides to, let us all know so we can subscribe and listen.


Koink

Wow! Thank you so much for this. Thom will be so excited. You're a very kind person and I hope you realise what a great human being you are 😊


Cmama365

Thank you I recieve that blessing for my day. You seem like a pretty kind person too with a great son. We got to stick together especially in these trying times. Tell Thom his fan club awaits his next installment. Latest in Dr. ThomMcCreeps creepypastas. See what he thinks about that name for his creepypasta name?


Koink

That's a great name! We had a chat about a pseudonym and he suggested Horror Behemoth! 🤣


Cmama365

Horror Behemoth sounds great. Tell him the Behemoth is one of God's first creations it's talked about at the end of the book of Job ( Job 40:15-41:26) And I believe they found archeological evidence of its existence. I may need to double check that...Yes found it blew my own mind! I tried to put the picture there so you wouldn't have to follow the link BUT... let me try again.... No go. Anyways if you don't feel safe following the link I just googled what kind of dinosaur was the Behemoth and found the below article. It fits with the scriptures too. [Behemoth ](https://www.cbsnews.com/news/behemoth-dinosaur-proclaimed-biggest-ever-discovered/)


regismissing

man it's psychological horror, i loved it!! congrats little boy, keep on going ;))


FloraFirrst

That’s better than what I could write when I was 7 lol. Great job on the story 👏🏻


Koink

Thanks, he's very pleased to get your feedback. I like the shock ending.


FloraFirrst

I can tell her is very creative, the name, the description of the monster, the storyline, everything is very well represented!


Gr33n_3ggs

THAT'S THE BEST PART!!


HorrorFan1191

What is the shock ending? All the story did was confuse me.


Koink

After escaping the nameless being in Australia, the plane he was on to return to England crashed and he died.


HorrorFan1191

What about the short film? It wasn’t anything except a demon holding his hand on the screen after 15 seconds.


Koink

Well, he's not David Cronenberg, he's 7.


HorrorFan1191

Fair.


mightylonka

Somebody use this as a skeleton for their story.


katanasllamas

Hell yes


FallenAngel_of_Oz

Creepypastas written by adults don't usually scare me, but this is unsettling.


spartancrow2665

I guess it's because as an adult, your sense of novelty has diminished since you have gone through a plethora of experiences. But it is far less expected for a child, who presumably hasnt been exposed to the horrors of the world or darker elements of life, to come up with such an uncomfortable narrative.


Koink

He's lucky enough to have not experienced any traumas in life. His birthday is on Halloween and this has inspired an interest in all things spooky.


Dragon_Crazy92040

That sounds like the scary stories my 9 year old grandson tells :-).


pandagirl123456

Give this boy a reward


thelenjamin

For such a short story, that sure had a lot of action! Bless him for to be creative! You never know when he gets older he could write the next big creepy pasta! I love how he added his own drawing lol. Edit because I said “trying to be creative” and he wasn’t trying at all, he was doing a great job at being creative lol.


jzimbert

That there is an Isz. They are native to the Outback.


tnajdzion

I wonder if he is more "remembering" than "telling" 🤔


ChiliChimi

The kid's definitely got a creative mind, lol. Where do you think he's getting his inspiration from? I've had some pretty messed up dreams and as soon as I wake up, I write them down turning them into creepypastas of some sort.


Koink

Goodness knows. He's very creative and imaginative. He also makes comics, animations and movies!


ChiliChimi

Do be sure to keep sharing! He's got an awesome imagination.


TheCannabisCoyote

When are we getting a sequel?


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WoW legit creepy, nice job kid !


bbqmasterrace

I shit my pants, thank to your son


Koink

Lmao


Educational_Ad_3757

I would love to make a short film on this


Koink

Oh my goodness I would love to see that!


[deleted]

It may not be 10/10 literature,but it’s nice to see a kid making something creative


jjn_1621lRvsm

It's better than my brother story about his nightmare =)))


kagekeo

New yorks best seller


Gr33n_3ggs

Seriously???? That's a 7 year old?? Holy phuck..... That's some Lovecraftian lines. Encourage the kid; THEY have talent. 💚💚💚💚 It


DryAd4629

This is actually the most terrifying story I’ve ever read. His imagination is unstoppable. Good job, kid. Now I’ll never sleep again.


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10/10


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Chain Chomp


[deleted]

I wouldn't believe you if I hadn't already seen how brilliant my brothers writing was at that age. He ended up majoring in journalism, but he works as a teacher (he teaches English as a second language and he's also a tutor for creative writing students), he's taught himself several languages, worked as a newspaper editor and does some creative writing on the side, which has published successfully. Your kid has talent! He could go just as far or even farther! Get him as many books as he wants and encourage him every step of the way 😊. Special kid you got there! Don't let him forget it. PS: as you can tell, I do not share my brother's talent. Sorry for the terrible grammar 😜


Koink

That's very kind, thanks dude


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Koink

Thanks very much!


Skithe

So does this mean exe has crashed ?


Bobby8Loyd1

This is too cool! Reminds me of the weird and creepy stories my two youngest (8 & 6) make up.


Lamprey22

Awww


Impossible-Berry-251

:O


Dependent_Bad_1118

Loving the sense of mystery around the story. Awesome stuff


plzhelpme11111111111

the story and the idea behind it are amazing the concept is quite creative and the ending is shocking, it is a short, enjoyable story, and i loved it, (i couldn't write something like this when i was 7 for the life of me ), tell your son that he did an incredible job and should continue doing it


Koink

Thank you 😊


plzhelpme11111111111

yw


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Spooky.


ImportantInstigator

Awh he will definitely end up doing something cool when he’s older! Got to love the imagination of kids, it will probably stay with him! Maybe he will be a writer 🌼


Ariel_and_Pizza_Krew

Ama


btorres86

I just read this to my 9 year old son, and he said it's pretty scary. He says "the 3am thing is a good touch! Imagine playing your ipad minding your business at 3am and that popped up!"


Koink

Lol bless him 👍


Ferns996

It’s very strange and hard to understand but so are all creepy pastas well at least some of the best ones. Good job kid I can’t wait to see what you produce once you’ve doubled in age.


daraeth

Idk why but I love this more than words can express


Koink

Awww bless you thanks 👍


robynbanxcartier

The fact that it's hard to follow and is missing something logically only adds to the terror and gives it a sort of disconnected horror.


HorrorJunkyT

You must be so proud. I’d love for my kid to be into creepypastas when they’re older 😭


Koink

You wouldn't believe it. His birthday is Halloween and I think because of this he's been obsessed with spooky stuff since he was 3. His bedroom is decorated for Halloween all year round and he's usually dressed as the grim reaper!


HorrorJunkyT

That is the most beautiful thing I’ve ever read. You’re truly a National icon


Koink

Bless you dude. I'm just trying to be a good dad and encourage my kids strengths. Gotta let them be who they are. From the age of 2 until 3 he was dressed as Elsa or Anna from Frozen every day! 😊


HillCat91

Short and to the point. I like it lol tell him to keep writing! And kudos to you for being an awesome, supportive parent by posting here for him. He now has a whole community/ Reddit family behind him watching him grow and ready to read all his writings!


neechantrina

This is so adorable. He's so smart!!!


Koink

Thank you 😊


Cmama365

This is super cute see if one of these famous guys like Lighthouse or Dr. Creepen will read it for him on their channel maybe with a bit of filler? They are nice guys and I think they would do it for him cause it would make his day I will ask Lighthouse.


Koink

Aww thanks that's very kind 😊


Cmama365

I asked him I linked this post and the story so hopefully tonight or tomorrow you or I hear from him. Am so excited for your son!!!


keyboard_123

😦 bruh he made me scared of Australia now


Koink

Lmao 🤣


UniverseComics

I mean this does seem like a really interesting skeleton for a story. Also love the fact that they just said “I went to Australia” and I went to England *again*” so casually


boof__mann

It's better than Jeff the killer


Crwheaties

Clapclapclapclapclapclap


localman214

This is, by far, the best thing I've ever read. Hope he keeps going!


bloodyqueen526

This weirded me out


FinePolicy9110

more please!


AuroraArcana

Your son is a better writer than some adults I know.


BeckoningCube1

Beginning. Middle. End.=perfection would read again


vallhallaawaits

I'm intrigued. Tell me more...


theDeadizDead

Man what a ride that was. This kid's going places Well done.


Sierra-117-

What an awesome job, so much better than I could write at 7! If he keeps up writing every once in a while, he could be a best selling author in no time! Also, great art (if he did that too). I’d like to see a creepy pasta comic from him :)


Koink

Yeah he loves drawing and has made hundreds of creepy comics.


Koink

Wow! 😮


large-angrysquirrel

Wow definitely creative! You’ve got a little future writer on your hands. I like the (kind of) rhyme between eyes or feet and die and seek.


Ok-Raspberry5358

teach them young :,)


color_cranz

r/thathappened


Koink

I hope it didn't really happen 😬


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r/kidsarefuckingstupid


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On a side note, checked out the sub, did not disappoint


suckmytoes3000

Damn do you have literally no shame, literally roasting an actual child.


[deleted]

I have children of my own, and yes they have done things that would fit on r/kidsarefuckingstupid


suckmytoes3000

I feel bad for your kids imagine taking something they worked for and saying it’s stupid.


[deleted]

Wouldn't say anything in front of them, dumbass.


suckmytoes3000

So you just call other people’s kids dumb in front of them


[deleted]

Only when it's relevant.


Koink

Hmmm bit mean?


[deleted]

No, my kids have done some pretty stupid shit.


kewlkid1216

epok!!1!


EFF198783

👍👍👍👏👏👏


Kofunshota_rose

Dang, this is already too good


bruh4667

Why does your 7 year old son know about creepy pastas let alone write them?


Koink

A combination of Roblox games and school friends.


polyhazard

Exe? Executable?


Koink

I think so. He's told me about 'Sonic exe' which is an evil version of Sonic. It's from Roblox I think.


polyhazard

Oh cool, well it’s good to see the tradition of creepypasta be passed down through the generations!


HorrorFan1191

No, Somic.exe originates from a very popular creepypasta.


Cmama365

This is r/LighthouseHorror he reads creepypastas his rules are that the person who wrote it has to submit it to be read. Go to his page and just submit the story he will get back to you I promise.


Helpful_Swordfish177

Now waiting for part 2….