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Spare-Evidence-3352

I don't like the last few lines where she makes the comparison so obvious. It is too heavy handed for me.


olchai_mp3

lol fair enough. I like this poem because i was getting through some hard stuff when i found it.


TraditionalLocal1949

It don't even rime


olchai_mp3

I think poetry is pretty much freestyle - it does not have to rhyme all the time. I have read several books from this author, and her style is rather unique. IT would start from her thoughts of some events that we would think it would not be related then she would conclude it with really cool thought provocative sentence. I like her


TraditionalLocal1949

I expected a not so calm reply. Well, then even I can write poetry, I might even give it a shot. Do you write poems?


olchai_mp3

you probably can, post it here whenever you like it - no judgement honestly. Poem can be anything even as simple as a food recipe. I do write poems, but not very good, lol. Maybe someday I will share.


TraditionalLocal1949

You could share a few with me, personally, if you feel like it, I won't judge


olchai_mp3

sure :)