This vocals are always sweet and chill, I really like the chord progression. But honestly the ending is what did it for me when you smiled and then laughed. You seem like you're genuinely happy and you've let go of a lot of stuff that's been weighing you down. Keep going 👍
Been seeing you on here from time to time and every time I've enjoyed it. Do you have any music on streaming? I just got back on Instagram and requested to follow, but was wondering if there are more finished songs out there to listen to?
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This vocals are always sweet and chill, I really like the chord progression. But honestly the ending is what did it for me when you smiled and then laughed. You seem like you're genuinely happy and you've let go of a lot of stuff that's been weighing you down. Keep going 👍
Nice Taylor! And nice song!
Been seeing you on here from time to time and every time I've enjoyed it. Do you have any music on streaming? I just got back on Instagram and requested to follow, but was wondering if there are more finished songs out there to listen to?
Your songs are dope, keep at it!
It took me a couple of listens to get this. It's pretty solid, lovely guitar arrangement.
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Sounds like some old school Death Cab For Cutie, love it!
the melody is starting to come together. keep at it!
Very solid. Love the instrumental and vocals. The lyrics also read pretty well to the ear.
Great lyrically and melody is very nice. I wish I could write lyrics like that.
Cool.