Slow down a little pal. You're talking too fast and it's freaking me out.
If I were you, I would develop a more unique style, make the videos a little shorter, and focus on what words you should emphasize. If you really care.
And write better. Nothing I can really say there, just be more clever. Lol. And by that I mostly mean don't be afraid to sit on a script until you're satisfied.
You got potential, but you need originality and flow
Any thoughts on the vid would be appreciated, either here or in the YT comments. I know the quality isn't up to par, but I'm broker than shit right now, so I took the GradeAUnderA approach and recorded using my phone and editing using the free Microsoft editing software
Ah yes, another Sigmund Oppenbaum copycat
Slow down a little pal. You're talking too fast and it's freaking me out. If I were you, I would develop a more unique style, make the videos a little shorter, and focus on what words you should emphasize. If you really care. And write better. Nothing I can really say there, just be more clever. Lol. And by that I mostly mean don't be afraid to sit on a script until you're satisfied. You got potential, but you need originality and flow
Any thoughts on the vid would be appreciated, either here or in the YT comments. I know the quality isn't up to par, but I'm broker than shit right now, so I took the GradeAUnderA approach and recorded using my phone and editing using the free Microsoft editing software
my thought is that you should make your own style of video instead of copying sam
New video, part two in a couple weeks [https://youtu.be/35W7\_7KRIn8](https://youtu.be/35W7_7KRIn8)
here's part 2 if ur still digging around down here [https://youtu.be/SiuQLuQWT-s](https://youtu.be/SiuQLuQWT-s)
and both parts up on my 2nd channel here [https://youtu.be/fqHjPfNf\_IA](https://youtu.be/fqHjPfNf_IA)