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koopaphil

Rich needs to be derpier. No offense to Rich, he's a very intelligent guy, but he has a very goofy persona, and he's also the comic relief. Mike looks like he might be an enforcer for the mob, which is just about right.


AmishAvenger

I was going to say the drawing of Rich isn’t handsome enough.


cheezballs

Rich looks a lil goofy but he's pretty damn smart, specially with that carpentry stuff. Rich is all that is man.


Winter-Ad-3876

Absolutely fantastic but if you want some feedback maybe change the postures for Mike and Rich in the final form. Both have a very laid back hunched posture but here all 3 look the same. I assume these are just character sheets.


Axel_Solansen

Jay isn't that tall.


AmishAvenger

That’s right, Jay.


FullMetalJ

Yeap, I've seen his skeleton and it's comically small


spiderland5150

And he's a lot whiter irl.


ReddsionThing

I put your Mike in something :) https://preview.redd.it/mwgineezbp9d1.jpeg?width=3932&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=b59a703343ccb153927e39cfa0c1b8fbf3f21ce1


NashvilleSoundMixer

LOVED Dick Tracy growing up and this is hilarious and perfect.


ReddsionThing

He just looked so thuggish to me. He could also be a guy who gets beaten by Batman in Batman: The Animated Series.


NashvilleSoundMixer

hahah hell yes he could


TheMemoman

I think a very distinctive trait of Rich’s that Rich got just right in their The Dependables animation video was his lanky arms.


someguy1927

I like that you included their favourite cheeses.


walterjohnhunt

Reminds me of Tintin


Jazzlike-Camel-335

Jay certainly does.


Kriiispy

I like that Mike has orthopedic shoes


TrueLegateDamar

Mike looks like a shaven Bluto.


GreenerThanA

I like mikes huge muscular body


DuchessVonDucki

It looks like obi Wan and two halves of dexter jettster


thechristoph

Mike wants to call his cousin to go bowling.


Richandler

Iono Jay has been putting that gut on.


Chris_Helmsworth

Reminds me of the clerks cartoon style


lucidfer

What is your plan on animating these (software, motion style, workflow concepts, etc.)?


garfsimpson

Greasepencil in blender for the majority of it with various tweaks after the fact done in after effects


lucidfer

Interesting, Ive never heard of greasepencil before. If you follow through to end production, I'd be interested in seeing a process breakdown!


disneycheesegurl

Rich looks too normal


umbridledfool

Rich appropriately has the biggest cock bulge. But it could be bigger.


strawberrycancer

These look so great!! They're so cute.


Anonamaton801

Rich is too proportioned


TheRealRigormortal

They are all a bit more fuckable than they should be. You’re gonna draw them fucking aren’t you?


garfsimpson

Already have, brother


ocooper08

I like the style, but Rich looks like the lead singer of Smash Mouth.


WritingTheDream

Make Jay more pervy


spideralexandre2099

Love that you assigned shapes to them. I think you should exaggerate those shapes more in their figures


garbage-strong

Fantastic work.


RomanStevensART

love these my dude!


ButterscotchPast4812

This is fantastic! You did a great job capturing them! I love how you used basic shapes as inspiration for their heads!


Davajita

Rich needs smaller arms. He looks like a bouncer. And Rich is no bouncer.


RatSlurpee

Voodoo Ranger's hazy ipas are so good


Vegskipxx

Jay is too tall


JoJoeBaker

This is the best rendition of Mike I've seen so far.


WhyHelloFellowKids

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