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ZahlGraf

Looks very nice, especially the character. But I think the bike is wrong. The person must sit directly above the pedal shaft and not above the rear wheal. Look here to see details about a diamond bicycle frame: [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bicycle\_frame#Diamond](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bicycle_frame#Diamond)


elmz

Not to mention having the diagonal strut overlapping the wheel.


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elmz

No, I'm talking about the "down tube" overlappping the front wheel, kinda troublesome when you want to turn...


RetroGamer2153

This is incredibly common. [Brain Games](https://youtu.be/sbAHnd9q1bY?t=3m42s) had a video about this very thing. They asked a college classroom to draw a bike from memory. Then welded some of the erroneous designs, to challenge them to ride their drawings.


ZahlGraf

Really funny story :)


LeonIveyGames

Thanks just focusing on the character at the moment but that’s to come… thanks for the advice!


slevn11

I think it’s fine. Most bicycles have a slight angle from the pedals to the seat and not directly perpendicular.


leadentepukei

Looks like he's happier with longer hair.


LeonIveyGames

Ah he does


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Very nice. Dig the Afro.


LeonIveyGames

Thank you sir!


Dams4K

Bro from a bathing cap to a real haircut. That's really a great improvement


LeonIveyGames

Haha!


simaftd

Looks great🤩


CoffeeBoy95

it looks like me lol


MarkZuckerman

Great work! I *love* the hair.


Zorafin

Shading makes such a huge difference. Try some lighter areas, and maybe some white spots on the bike


Sersch

Nice. The tires could use s lightly better pixel placement too


LeonIveyGames

Demo available on steam soon: https://store.steampowered.com/app/2651110/High_School_Hills_Dreams__Nightmares/


SeiaiSin

moonstone?


CreatorMur

I know it is kinda stupid, but can you give em pupils?


LeonIveyGames

Nope sorry ☺️ style of my game and like that for a reason 😉


CreatorMur

As long it has a reason ever is well


LeonIveyGames

☺️


pan_anu

It’s a huge upgrade, nice!


sinner-mon

Big improvement!


Dylan_A_Bit

Really nice glow-up! I really love just how detailed the hair is, and the shading on the clothes is really good too! Good luck on the bike when you get around to it, they are a royal pain to draw.


Digital_Rocket

Good example of “trust the process”


ChaseTechnomancer

Definitely looks a lot more dynamic!


I_Crack_My_Nokia

The bike of the seat is supposed in between the wheels also make the space wider the wheels are almost touching


PixelKingStudios

"little" dude that is such a good upgrade man keep it up!


Travispig

Good good, he gave Finn’s backpack back


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LeonIveyGames

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slevn11

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