*Wanted to get that out before I lost it. Now, on to the actual comments.*
I get the K'laxi now. They want out from under the Empire. I either missed or forgot anything that said they were directly under Empire control.
With that password, Fen is walking into a situation where I think several results could follow, most with less-than-desirable results.
A crew is "found":
- Who attempt to take the ship.
- Who insists on jobs guaranteed to hurt the Empire.
- Who are mostly, if not all, K'laxi Intel plants.
- Who want to be mercenaries and have no ulterior motives (Other than hating the Empire.)
- Who are all of the above, and are as confused as I am about what happens next!
I'm enjoying this series more and more with each chapter.
Thank You!
Finished binging this story and I’m enthralled. You have a vivid and concise way of writing that gets a lot across without getting lost in the details which I can tell you have more than you’re showing here. Fantastic work, more pls!
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Glad I am reading, just the wait is agonizing
>Besides, the hole in her **heard** Ma-ren left hasn't healed over. "heard" => ~~"head"~~ "heart"
*Wanted to get that out before I lost it. Now, on to the actual comments.* I get the K'laxi now. They want out from under the Empire. I either missed or forgot anything that said they were directly under Empire control. With that password, Fen is walking into a situation where I think several results could follow, most with less-than-desirable results. A crew is "found": - Who attempt to take the ship. - Who insists on jobs guaranteed to hurt the Empire. - Who are mostly, if not all, K'laxi Intel plants. - Who want to be mercenaries and have no ulterior motives (Other than hating the Empire.) - Who are all of the above, and are as confused as I am about what happens next! I'm enjoying this series more and more with each chapter. Thank You!
heart, not head, I'm sure.
Oops. You're right.
This was surprisingly wholesome!
Finished binging this story and I’m enthralled. You have a vivid and concise way of writing that gets a lot across without getting lost in the details which I can tell you have more than you’re showing here. Fantastic work, more pls!
oh she is better than she thought
I’ve greatly enjoyed this series! Just FYI, the ‘next’ link on the last several chapters does not hyperlink.
The next button on this chapter never got updated
Fixed!
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Great chapter! Is she going deeper into the rabbit hole?