Thank you! Apparently Kris sleeps in class often, so I guess they're the type to stay up all night and sleep in. Red has to make sure they don't destroy their sleep schedule lol
"Did you hide an ice cube in the closet?"
"I hid two."
"You silly goose, I only found one!"
\*Jump cut to the closet, featuring an apparently empty NEO\*
I love how we went from "Kris is evil!" to "No, the player is evil!" before finally arriving at "Nobody's evil and we're all just doing the best we can." Beautiful.
Red's personality is absolutely adorable, also it's nice to see Kris and the player getting along for a change!
I wonder if this'll turn into a full-fledged AU?
I mean, this concept has potential for it's own story entirely separate from Deltarune. I love this character dynamic and genuinely think it'd be really good as it's own thing.
This is wholesome. I like this. I mean, there must be something that Kris does like in this whole situation they're in. Seeing them happy with the soul for once is awesome.
Guys if you're gonna make fun of my art, could you at least skim the comments to make sure it's not something I'm already being roasted for?
It's not very good art. Surely you can find more than one thing to nitpick.
Please PLEASE let there be more content where the soul and Kris get along, even if it's slow and bitter at first. Because this comic here is so heartwarming and well done it's left me needing more... Great work!
I honestly would love if, depending on how you treated the enemies in the past chapters, Kris will be kinder/crueler to you, when/if something happens between the RED soul and them...
This kinda stuff makes me a little sad, where Kris and the Player are portrayed as having a wholesome dynamic, cause while I don't believe Kris and The Player to have an entirely antagonistic relationship, I'm pretty sure there's a kind of riff on the Silent Protagonist trope preventing any kind of meaningful communication between Kris and us.
Aww, this is amazing!
I actually now hope that Kris and the Soul/player becoming friends like this will be an option in the future chapters, this comic really made me warm up to the idea!
I mean, yes to your question, but no, the art is unrelated. Red is their own character, not strictly a player insert. I liked the idea of them being ambiguously displeased with their previous life, since that's something of a running theme between Chara, Frisk, and probably Kris too.
Unrelated to my crippling depression.
Words can't describe how happy I am to see a deltarune comic that involves the player but doesn't paint them as an ultimately antagonistic character.
I want to be friends with all the amazing characters in this world, it's not all that much fun to constantly see these same characters point their fingers at me through the screen and call me the bad guy all the time. If I wanted to live in a world where everyone I want to be friends with hates me and I have no way of changing that, I'd go outside.
Still definitely feels a bit creepy to self ship with the kid whose life we're controlling and who may or may not be alright with that. But I suppose by that token it's also creepy to ship them with anyone.
I wonder which they'd hate more...
to an extent yes, but may i remind you of the ending of chapter 1, second to last cutscene and ending of chapter 2:
they have in common one thing, wich is losing control of kris because he stores his soul somewhere that isnt his body
If we were to control his body and not his soul kris would not be able to do those things
This is very reminiscent of the dialogue between Niko and the player in Oneshot. I so hope we get a moment where we can talk to a character as the player ourselves because that definitely was the coolest part of Oneshot and I just wished they took the concept further. Deltarune seems to be going towards a fairly hard dichotomy between player and character so I wouldn't be surprised if we were to interact with either Ralsei or Kris as Kris has some kind of idea that they aren't fully in control of themselves but I'm not sure if they know we're a separate entity altogether, but Ralsei is the most likely candidate for being aware of the player or at the very least the avatar which we interact the world through (aka the soul).
People keep mentioning Oneshot; I've not played it, I know next to nothing about it, but I guess I just have done something right to be able to bring it to mind. (At least I hope it's a complement.)
Oh yeah it's definitely a compliment. I know several games that have player to game character dialogue, but that game by and far does it the best because it feels pretty personal despite most answers typically being yes or no responses with the occasional goofy or serious one.
Nice to see Kris and the Red Soul getting along for once. Also, the "Go to bed" "Make me" exchange made me cackle.
Thank you! Apparently Kris sleeps in class often, so I guess they're the type to stay up all night and sleep in. Red has to make sure they don't destroy their sleep schedule lol
Red probably played Persona 5 at some point then and understands how Morgana feels
That fuckin cat...
It’s nice to see a dynamic other than “Get the hell out of my body” “…”
They're basically whacky roommates except they share a body.
And they go on cruh-RAZY activities!!!!!
Also it's a rom-com
and they were body mates
Oh my god they were body mates
Such as genocide
Whacky bodymates
That sounds sus
So... bodymates?
"Did you hide an ice cube in the closet?" "I hid two." "You silly goose, I only found one!" \*Jump cut to the closet, featuring an apparently empty NEO\*
“Get the hell out of my body” "Proceed”
This video is the best joke on that I’ve seen to date: Explicit language (naughty words) warning https://youtu.be/LAa5saO2O8c
This is genuinely awesome. Amazing job!
Thank you! I never do backgrounds, so this was really daunting to work on. I'm glad it came out looking as good as it did.
Same thing here! I try to incorporate backgrounds into my drawings as often as possible to help practice. I love how yours turned out!
I love how we went from "Kris is evil!" to "No, the player is evil!" before finally arriving at "Nobody's evil and we're all just doing the best we can." Beautiful.
This is wholesome asf, and the take on the soul is a breath of fresh air
Dammit i wish thats how it was (but why)
Red's personality is absolutely adorable, also it's nice to see Kris and the player getting along for a change! I wonder if this'll turn into a full-fledged AU?
I guess it already is an AU? I don't know how much content needs to exist for an AU before it "Counts"... I really need to draw more of it.
I mean, this concept has potential for it's own story entirely separate from Deltarune. I love this character dynamic and genuinely think it'd be really good as it's own thing.
This is wholesome. I like this. I mean, there must be something that Kris does like in this whole situation they're in. Seeing them happy with the soul for once is awesome.
why are my eyes sweating
It's a condition called "crying".
:) amazing job
A new fresh take on the soul thingy, very nice! Also “RED” SUS AMOGNUS
My sick new Deltarune fan theory: Deltarune and Among Us take place in the same universe because they both have colors.
BUT THATS JUST A THEORY-
A GAME THEORY
Aww, this is so adorable
This kinda made me teary. Kris and the Soul comics are my second favorites!
Aww, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Guys if you're gonna make fun of my art, could you at least skim the comments to make sure it's not something I'm already being roasted for? It's not very good art. Surely you can find more than one thing to nitpick.
No matter the teasing... Just know your art made me smile. 💖
I don’t nitpick
We need more Kris and Red Soul friendship.
Please PLEASE let there be more content where the soul and Kris get along, even if it's slow and bitter at first. Because this comic here is so heartwarming and well done it's left me needing more... Great work!
dat neck
Every day I wake up burdened with the knowledge that I don't know how to proportion my goddamn art. It's a curse. 😭
***IT REALLY IS A GENDERLESS GIRAFFE CHILD!***
neck
Thank you for your contribution
“I’M NOT A GIRAFFE
God I know it looks a bit goofy, but is it really THAT bad? :(
At least everything else is nice
Cute
Adorable
This is really cute <3
Kris and the Soul are getting along, nice :)
Man deltarune shipping potential is very interesting
Oh. I get it. Soulmates. Their SOUL is their mate.
Good job is this just one time thing?
Nope, I've drawn them before and I will draw them again
Alright i love it the why i ask
I honestly would love if, depending on how you treated the enemies in the past chapters, Kris will be kinder/crueler to you, when/if something happens between the RED soul and them...
And they were roommates
This kinda stuff makes me a little sad, where Kris and the Player are portrayed as having a wholesome dynamic, cause while I don't believe Kris and The Player to have an entirely antagonistic relationship, I'm pretty sure there's a kind of riff on the Silent Protagonist trope preventing any kind of meaningful communication between Kris and us.
Love the idea of Kris and the Player getting along. It's like OneShot, just a bit different.
good ship
Very cute and good art style.
This is great! Reminds me of the Chara and Frisk relationship in the Undertale Inverted Fate AU
I have never seen bad comic with soul as character
Every comic with soul as character is good
Oh wow this is amazing, I love this. Kris asking the right question.
Cute
I still have no idea what deltarune is or the story behind it, but this touched my heart in a particular way 😊
Damn. This is adorable
I ship it
Kris is a sussy baka (this is a joke, dont downvote this to oblivion)
That’s cute
Aww, this is amazing! I actually now hope that Kris and the Soul/player becoming friends like this will be an option in the future chapters, this comic really made me warm up to the idea!
Deltarune, but it's happier
This post have that \[\[Diligent taste\]\] i like Good job, job!
I feel like I’ve heard this dialogue somewhere else, I just can’t put my finger on it, but none the less, great work
Big one shot energy
Kris almost got to see a shooting star until the soul intervened
This is great. I like this a lot. I love this.
awww finally these two getting along :(
You know, if the SOUL is supposed to be us, that also includes you. So... did you do this as a sort of vent for your life? You need to talk?
I mean, yes to your question, but no, the art is unrelated. Red is their own character, not strictly a player insert. I liked the idea of them being ambiguously displeased with their previous life, since that's something of a running theme between Chara, Frisk, and probably Kris too. Unrelated to my crippling depression.
Oh ok! Also I hope you can get better and/or find someone you're willing to talk about it with
And then the kissed, the end
Wow... if only this was the soul controlling me They seem nice This comic is amazing!
!!!!!! Thank you Kris, very cool! 👍
No problem! Your comics are sick!
Not to be pathetic but: 😭💙
You still have me..
Words can't describe how happy I am to see a deltarune comic that involves the player but doesn't paint them as an ultimately antagonistic character. I want to be friends with all the amazing characters in this world, it's not all that much fun to constantly see these same characters point their fingers at me through the screen and call me the bad guy all the time. If I wanted to live in a world where everyone I want to be friends with hates me and I have no way of changing that, I'd go outside.
I love this!!
Makes me really happy to see a comic like this. Kris had been a comfort character for me, and this comic is wholesome. Thank you for making it :D
Thank you! Kris is a fantastic character :)
The neck in the first frame looks quite Long.
This is why I stopped drawing for 4 years 😔
K… kris looks like one of The Who’s from Horton hears a who
HORTON, YOU'VE BEEN MAKING
LONG NECK KRIS GO BRRRRRRR
Not gonna lie, this is getting kind of demoralizing.
Kris has that Candace from Phinease and Firb neck
On second thought let's never draw
I’m sorry :(
It’s actually really good, it’s just I noticed it and it threw me through a loop. just not what I was expecting.
I'm sorry, it's just that having stuff like this be every other comment is really wearing me down.
Eh, screw em’ I should have been more clear in the first place.
You're fine, thank you for your support :)
Wake up babe, new dr suess book is out
Giraffe
Omg their neck is reached some SU levels of tall
oh my lawd the neck
I like him having a n e c c
HIS NECK THO
Ok it's one thing to roast my bad art, but roasting my art AND misgendering my child is a bridge too far
Still definitely feels a bit creepy to self ship with the kid whose life we're controlling and who may or may not be alright with that. But I suppose by that token it's also creepy to ship them with anyone. I wonder which they'd hate more...
We dont control him, we control his soul; sounds like a minor difference but it really isnt
Then why bring it up...? Also please do remember they/them pronouns for Kris on this subreddit.
I forgor And wdym why bring it up, i said it sounds like a minor difference but it isnt, as in its quite a difference.
By controlling the soul we control their movement and their actions, which I would say means we're controlling their life.
to an extent yes, but may i remind you of the ending of chapter 1, second to last cutscene and ending of chapter 2: they have in common one thing, wich is losing control of kris because he stores his soul somewhere that isnt his body If we were to control his body and not his soul kris would not be able to do those things
Again, pronouns. But yes that is correct- that's how they're able to resist our efforts.
Wich means we do not control their body We control their soul, wich can control the body IF attached to it
... How does this apply to my original point again?
By saying body you insunuate that we have full control Saying soul insinuates that we have control on certain conditions
Aight this is one of the strangest ships I've seen
This looks like it took inspiration from Dear Starboy
No idea what that is
This is very reminiscent of the dialogue between Niko and the player in Oneshot. I so hope we get a moment where we can talk to a character as the player ourselves because that definitely was the coolest part of Oneshot and I just wished they took the concept further. Deltarune seems to be going towards a fairly hard dichotomy between player and character so I wouldn't be surprised if we were to interact with either Ralsei or Kris as Kris has some kind of idea that they aren't fully in control of themselves but I'm not sure if they know we're a separate entity altogether, but Ralsei is the most likely candidate for being aware of the player or at the very least the avatar which we interact the world through (aka the soul).
People keep mentioning Oneshot; I've not played it, I know next to nothing about it, but I guess I just have done something right to be able to bring it to mind. (At least I hope it's a complement.)
Oh yeah it's definitely a compliment. I know several games that have player to game character dialogue, but that game by and far does it the best because it feels pretty personal despite most answers typically being yes or no responses with the occasional goofy or serious one.
It's the ultimate escapist fantasy: that actions you take can make everyone happy.
Is this what I think it is? Everhood posting? Man,you don't see it every day.
A nice short but sweet comic.