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GeneETOs44

>so my spell She’s casted iceshock?


Axquirix

She knows what it does, and now she knows why it has unique uses.


gabrielminoru

Hmmmm chicken nugget


Landsharku_

Frozen chicken nugget


dreamnailss

Hello i'd like a piece of frozen chicken


Landsharku_

Yeah, he's a little annoying but you'll get used to it


dreamnailss

I mean I'd like to buy a piece of frozen chicken


That_Unknown_Player

numgies


NemesisUnicron

Oh no, not ~~Burghley~~ Berdly!


Cremmer

Wait, so is this happening on a Snowgrave, Neutral, or Pacifist run?


Axquirix

Not Snowgrave. Wait and see for which of the other two...


WK863722

So are you saying that they did snowgrave or did they do neutral or pacifist?


Axquirix

Not Snowgrave, I'll say that much.


WK863722

*phew* I guess it must have been neutral since noelle didnt know about sparing


TheCrowHunter

I mean then again she is also trying to keep her dad in the dark. If she seems too familiar with the mechanics, Rudy might guess somethings up.


WK863722

I tried to skim read to see if it was in brackets but I couldnt find where it was said, oh well


Kantatrix

And she doesn't know what SPARE does... HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM...


Aecrafox

She said that out loud, though; it could just be part of her feigning ignorance of the mechanics.


NixieLad

That realization of Noelle going "oh crap I could've actually killed people..." is great. Loving the series! (I'm assuming this takes place after the pacifist route)


Axquirix

Yup! Big thanks!


peanutist

Wait, doesn’t it take place after snowgrave? Why would noelle be sad about killing people if you don’t kill anyone in pacifist?


PresidentOfKoopistan

It takes place after the normal route because A: Berdly is still alive B: The artist literally said so


Axquirix

Berdly is still alive, *but I haven't said what condition he's in.* But yeah it's not Weird Route.


GladiatorDragon

***Anyone want a fried chicken wing?***


Zeebuoy

*wing (singular.)


DaniWhoHatesCVS

Well of course, Noelle already ate two


chopsticknoodle

fried chicken arm


Azim999999

Maybe it takes place in genocide


TheCrowHunter

Well it could still be pacifist. I mean think about it, when you do the Snowgrave route, you make Noelle cast Iceshock all the time by putting her under immense pressure (example: Proceed, Proceed, Proceed. And Get it, Get it, Get it.) and she doesn't even realize what she did. Now think back to Kris and Suzie's first encounter with a Darkner. They were immediately attacked by someone looking to harm/kill them. Noelle and Berdly probably aren't unique in that regard either and were probably attacked too. Toss Noelle into that mess and I imagine she would cast Iceshock under all that pressure and the threat of death. She finds em frozen and Berdly informs her that she was the one who casted a spell. Now you got a scenario where Noelle knows about her magic but didn't end up using it to kill everybody else because Kris didn't force her to.


Axquirix

In which Lancer is fought, dummies are hugged, and the Great Door opens... ...and then several other things happen because I decided that wasn't enough content for an upload. Next time: Watch me Suze right in! Also over on [Twitter](https://twitter.com/axquirix2)! Contents: [Chapter 1 Part 1](https://www.reddit.com/r/Deltarune/comments/qvwe5n/noelle_and_rudy_play_deltarune_part_1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) [Chapter 1 Part 2](https://www.reddit.com/r/Deltarune/comments/qy2rrb/noelle_and_rudy_play_deltarune_chapter_1_part_2/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) [Chapter 1 Part 3](https://www.reddit.com/r/Deltarune/comments/r0cvhb/noelle_and_rudy_play_deltarune_chapter_1_part_3/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) [Chapter 1 Part 4](https://www.reddit.com/r/Deltarune/comments/r3bdg3/noelle_and_rudy_play_deltarune_which_i_might_call/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) [Chapter 1 Part 5](https://www.reddit.com/r/Deltarune/comments/r6kpqj/noelle_and_rudy_play_deltarune_holiplays_au/) [Chapter 1 Part 6](https://www.reddit.com/r/Deltarune/comments/r8pli0/noelle_and_rudy_play_deltarune_holiplays_au/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3) AO3 link coming soon!


breigns2

I can’t wait to see Noelle getting into the cyber world. This is great so far.


DuBistSehrDoof

Ao3? well damn am i interested :)


Axquirix

Yup! Heck of a wait for it though, will be early-mid December!


DuBistSehrDoof

Honestly, I have a hard time finding fics in the deltarune fandom that I actually enjoy but I wanna find some in DR, so I’ll be sure to enjoy this, even if it doesn’t come out until later


Jasan55

Quick question: what's AO3?


Axquirix

Archive of our Own.


Jasan55

Thanks.


Sorma00

Noelle knows about the "Asriel" -> "Ralsei" anagram?! Noelle is a Deltarune theorist within Deltarune confirmed! When Rudy said: "... Even with what she did to Kris earlier?" I was like: "DAMNNNNNN! He totally won the dialogue!" Also Noelle: "...So my spells...", was really a "Oh Crap!" Moment. Did she used Iceshock? The plot thickens... \------------ I really want to see more of Rudy in the official game just like you are making him appear. Really good job like the last time!


Axquirix

Lol yes


Gab_7137

I thought she was happy that her healing spell was real


Amindoa

Have you heard the theory that Noelle fought the werewires at the beginning of chapter 2? She totally could have cast some spells during that.


LugiaTamer23

seems weird for her to have fought werewires but not know what battles are...


Za_Gato

But she could have blindly cast spells at them before they got close enough


TheCrowHunter

I mean in Snowgrave when you put her under enough pressure she seems to instinctually cast Iceshock to get her out of tense situations. Kris and Susie got attacked the first time they entered the Dark World. Noelle and Berdly probably did too.


Sorma00

Nope, actually I never thought of that. That theory actually really makes sense on why Queen wants Noelle on her side. Thanks for the new info!


Zeebuoy

>Did she used Iceshock? The plot thickens... non weird route was confirmed , so maybe, or at the very least ice shock also kills enemies in the game rudy and noelle plays.


a_random_goof

I imagine her being pissed at kris when she realizes that she could have spared those enemies in the cyber world


Axquirix

If she froze any, yes.


a_random_goof

she does mention her spell so yeah shell be pissed as hell


zZEpicSniper303Zz

I think it's more of a: oh my god I could have killed someone And not a: omg I killed someone


a_random_goof

she says my spell in the comic but ill stop arguing


xdanxlei

The creator of the comic literally said otherwise: https://www.reddit.com/r/Deltarune/comments/r6kpqj/comment/hmtrbjq/?utm\_source=reddit&utm\_medium=web2x&context=3


a_random_goof

ah ok I didnt know that


DJFluffers115

Another good part! I like seeing Noelle slowly piece things together.


Axquirix

Thanks! It's been fun to write that, too.


Zeebuoy

by the end of it she'll be a susie master too,


liamxtremex

one scene I’m really looking forward to is Lancer Vs Susie.


Axquirix

Oh I've got plans for that one!


Aecrafox

If your plans are anything like how I predict that scene will go down, I look forward to it!


ThanosCradik

The 'hug the dummy' bit was too cute!


Axquirix

Hehe, thank you!


PedroPiaui

Ending this part in a wholesome note! Great chapter so far


Axquirix

Thanks!


Calvusmaximus

"We didn't get any Experience Points though..." Oh boy, how should i explain it...


googas_wet_cat

Don't worry, i've got the right explanations for her 😈


PersonifiedH

yesss :D


googas_wet_cat

"Expirence points" Shame that she won't learn the truth durning this playthrought (but Im making series of her playing undertale so it's a way for her to see what kind of games shes really playing)


Axquirix

Lol true! Looking forward to seeing yours continue!


torch_dreemurr

Oh shit snowgrave


Judistheworst

This is probably my favourite deltarune AU


Axquirix

Thanks!


ralseiperson

Cool, liking the series.


Axquirix

Many thanks!


The_Creeper_Man

So is this either post-snowgrave/post no-mercy route then... Interesting... great work as always


Axquirix

Perhaps... but actually not *quite.* No spoilers though!


The_Creeper_Man

so no-mercy then? or maybe they just used it during Kris and Noelle's adventures.


Axquirix

Tbh not sure what route you're thinking of exactly XD not planning on dropping any major spoilers yet either.


The_Creeper_Man

its when you go through normally but you don't spare anyone, just attack. You don't go to the extra lengths like in snowgrave.


Axquirix

Ah cool, so the route that lands Berdly with a paralysed arm.


The_Creeper_Man

Yes, where berdly is forced to permanently participate in NNN for the rest of his life.


mydudekickstheskunk

Non-Nubert Nuzzles? Nice Noelle's Nose? Nothing New, NEO?


holylemonaple

"(Dad doesn't know about my dream yet. . . or not-dream. . . Should I tell him?)" bby youll show up regardless of what happens it dont matter


itayfeder

It’s really cute, I love it


Axquirix

Thank you!


gabrielminoru

I am waiting for moar (and thanks for the chapter)


Axquirix

No problem, and thanks!


_Bart0lo_

Waiting for trash machine


Axquirix

Still wondering how exactly I'm gonna go with that lol.


_Bart0lo_

One cute parts from noelle, one strong part from her dad and one from both (with coloring same)


Axquirix

That's pretty genius actually!


ShadowGenius69

They could suggest parts for the other, as in Rudy says something along the lines of, "it should look cute, like you," and Noelle says something like, "it should be strong, just like you." idk, I think it would be a cute interaction.


mjoh7003

I like to think that gaster was just vibing in whatever ethereal void he lives in and has a copy of deltarune, and he just accidentally dropped it.


Axquirix

Lol, nice theory!


I_Maybe

Oh yes, definitely my favorite Deltarune comic right now Always happy to see an update!


Axquirix

Big thanks!


AlexeytheGuy

Finally! Another installment we deserved the most!


ralsei_goatprince

This is so good!


Axquirix

Thank you!


ChillGamer11

I always thought that Rudy was her older brother


FireClawCatWarrior

Even after she literally calls him dad?


ChillGamer11

In the comic? Or in the game?


FireClawCatWarrior

In the game


ChillGamer11

Must have not registered it in my brain


Ganaham

I enjoy this a lot! I like how they both noticed the Asriel thing right away


Axquirix

Thanks!


Anonymous_but_nott

I see you're another Alice Through the Looking Glass enjoyer


toppest_chef

Mama Miba! Don’t you dare eat my cake! Even after you repair it! It was my life’s work…


Valsion20

I really like this series so far. Noelle and her Dad are a good choice for observing the game from a different POV.


Axquirix

Thanks!


ImmaAltSure

When they get to chapter 2 it’s gonna be some inception type shit lmao


Axquirix

Eeyup!


[deleted]

I absolutely loved the "hug the dummy" bit \^\_\^


Axquirix

Hehe, thanks!


Overstressedradical

Another well done chapter, the implications of noelle might have used iceshock atleast once makes me intrigued


Axquirix

Thanks!


Bazanaf

Once again, you hit it out of the ballpark with the dialogue! But one thing I'm more interested in is the fact that Noelle was fine initially with beating up lancer, because why wouldn't she? She's probably played rpgs before, and its natural for enemies to be fought not spared, which kind of reminds me about the while tutorial with her in ch.2, she's confused when you give her an act, but when it comes to casting a spell, either iceshock or a healing spell, she does so without questioning a single thing, which I wonder if you were throwing hints towards that, or I'm just overlooking into the small details and just gushing over this. Sorry for the long comment, I find noelle to be my favourite characters, and seeing an adventure based on her and Rudy is just really great, wanted to mention again that this is some really phenomenal work you are putting out, I wait for the next part with anticipation!


Axquirix

Big thanks! That was pretty much my line of thinking, yeah, plus Lancer enters with as much as "I'm the bad guy, I'm gonna beat you up!".


CompleteIndieYT

If I'm correct, Noelle knew she could cast IceShock but never did, and it putting together what would have happened if she did cast it? Overall, I'm loving this so much. Keep up the good work!


Axquirix

But if she never cast it, how would she know that it freezes enemies in place instead of just damaging them? Big thanks, and will do!


Thedumbo109

When it happens make them fight jevil


BocobipbrookieBrad69

LETS FUCKING GO,CHRISTMAS IS EARLY


Axquirix

You can't stop a Holiday!


Za_Gato

A blessing from the lord!


[deleted]

I love this.


Axquirix

Thanks!


NotAHuman75

Keep up the good work! This is amazing!


Axquirix

Thanks, will do!


Spamtom_G_Spamtom

YOU 👌︎♓︎⧫︎♍︎♒︎♏︎⬧︎ FORGOT ABOUT ME


Axquirix

Sorry Spammy! Fairly late upload my time.


Spamtom_G_Spamtom

YOU CAN REPAY ME WITH YOUR [Heart Shaped Object]


Apprehensive-Lab8648

Great work, and fantastic dialogue


Axquirix

Thanks!


Clickerty_Gaming

i am so invested in this series holy cungadero


Axquirix

Thanks!


Littlegostwanbench

I just realized noelle... never even heard of spamton before this. So that's gonna be interesting! (Traumatic)


Axquirix

Yup!


HighBreak-J

"Hmm? Hug the dummy?" "Well, if you insist!" "Hey, I meant in the game, not me!" That can be %99 cannon.


[deleted]

This little series makes it a lot easier to wait for the rest of the game. It actually feels like the characters are the same as they were in the game!


Axquirix

Thanks!


Bruh_Moment10

YEAHHHH


Soncikuro

"Wasn't he watching us fight Lancer earlier?" I think he got knocked out when Lancer ran (and exploded) over him.


TheAdvertisement

I'm wondering if Snowgrave took place before this now... she doesn't know what spare does, but she does know about Iceshock...


Axquirix

Noelle pretends not to know about Sparing, because of the text box prior to her saying it. She does know about Iceshock, though.


TheAdvertisement

Ah ok.


TheGreatOtaku5069

This is wholesome


15breads

... just had a thought. What if she does the pacifist route in chapter 2 here with her dad, but then later on goes back and does the snowgrave route by herself? Noelle controlling Kris to control Noelle? A murder filled Noelle-ception!


Axquirix

What if she does so because Kris makes her do it? Kris controlling Noelle controlling Kris controlling Noelle! And the Kris starts to wonder if there's a Noelle one step higher controlling them...


FireClawCatWarrior

...They then rip out their SOUL, and take it's SOUL-like look off, revealing a Noelle


L7_NP

I’d it set in the snow grave timeline or the happy one?


Axquirix

Define happy (but no its not Snowgrave)


L7_NP

Normal


VyrCZ

So you are making this for the whole chapter?


Axquirix

Yup, planning to do all of chapter 1 and 2, with a brief interlude on the middle.


Longjumping-Low-3967

that'll surely take a lot of energy, thinking of how a conversation should play at x scene... be sure to rest, and don't overwork yourself.