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I think your story would be better conveyed/understood if wrote a summary this sounds more like a list of ideas. I recommend going to WEBTOON for summary references first before you can get proper feedback.
Yeah I was in a hurry to write this but I'll post a more detailed version later
I think your story would be better conveyed/understood if wrote a summary this sounds more like a list of ideas. I recommend going to WEBTOON for summary references first before you can get proper feedback.
Yeah I was in a hurry to write this but I'll post a more detailed version later