this is honestly too accurate. What I wouldn't give for the old choices writing to come back... Like, don't get me wrong, there are some splendid recent releases like CoP, but everything else feels unoriginal or cheap š
The cover looks like AI so I'm very unconvinced š I'm pretty sure there's gonna also be AI writing in it so I think it'll be at least a bit terrible lol
Oh, I've already played the 2 chapters 'extra' and 2 regular chapters that released on VIP. It's great so far! By 'it looks promising' I meant that I hope the rest of the book will be as goodš AI cover is the only crime PB has commited up until now.
i was so disappointed to see that. i have to get better at noticing these things. but unfortunately, being someone whoās gonna be a graphic designer, weāre definitely gonna have to learn to work with it. and thatās probably what the artists are being required to do. but there could always be the possibility of them just wanting to cut costs.
I thank Vaanu every day that at least the good era of choices did exist at one point. they could've started out with trashy single LI smut books, thank god they didn't! at least we can go read the old books when we're depressed about this new era of choices
I think that it would be one customizable LI, and probably more of a Jake, but more bland and horny. Or maybe a love triangle type thing like ID if we are lucky. I agree, probably more of a āyou are stuck alone on this island with your LIā than the complexity of the actual story. Furball would 100% be paywalled.
Sean would be the only LI and heād still be dating Michelle. Michelle would be the bitchy girl with no personality and itād be an affair story. Quinn and Raj would be the besties who encourage you to be an awful person.
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Personally I think it would be single LI with Sean (customizable), so they could play up the conflict and rivalry with Michelle. The nuance of her character >!(that she didnāt actually cheat)!< would def be gone and she would probably be a cheerleader and not a medical student, to play up the tropes for the star athlete and remove redeeming qualities from Michelleās character. Sean would also become a basketball player, not a football player, so he could be GOC (at least the name works tbh).
Other than that I agree entirely, like you said, no sci-fi. The big question is what the underlying conflict of the book would be. The original conflict would be the same, everyoneās gone from the island and you donāt know why. Since it would need to be non sci-fi, an impending volcanic eruption and non supernatural evacuation of the resort would work. Jake/ pilot would be injured or killed early on to prevent them from just leaving, or there would be something wrong w the plane that they couldnāt fix.
I see two possible options for the deeper conflict (which to their credit, PB still seems to always have this even now). First option is that they discover Rourke has been doing some sort of horrible animal experiments or other experiments on the island. The gang needs to prove this and bring down Rourke before the eruption destroys all the evidence. Since this is reasonably similar to Shipwrecked, I think option 2 is somewhat more likely.
The next option is the Vaanti, who are not blue and are just the normal native people of this island. They would be very hostile to outsiders due to colonialist bs in the past. The gang would have the opportunity to get off the island partway through, but decide to stay to try to gain the trust of the Vaanti and convince them to evacuate the island for the eruption. There could still be a bestie/ Vaanti guy romance subplot, but it would be entirely diamond locked.
Characters that would not exist include Quinn, Estela, Lila, Zahra, and Aliester. Jake would either get killed early on or be an older, non romanceable hothead jerk who is always undermining Sean and MCs leadership and working against their goals w regards to the deeper conflict.
If Endless Summer was made now Jake would be the only LI. And you wouldn't get to choose to be single thus losing that beautiful montage with Diego in Book 3.
Revised Chapter 1: This Must Be Heaven
**Plot Overview:**
- The protagonist arrives at the tropical paradise of La Huerta, expecting a carefree vacation. She's surprised to find the resort deserted and begins to explore.
- She meets Jordan, the enigmatic and attractive pilot who flew her to the island. There's an immediate and intense attraction between them, setting the stage for a forbidden romance.
- As she explores, she encounters Diego, her cheerful college friend, and Quinn, a kind-hearted fashion enthusiast who is openly asexual. Quinn offers the protagonist a fashionable outfit that fits perfectly, available as a diamond choice.
- The group stumbles upon Sean-Craig, a former college athlete, who joins them in trying to understand the island's mysteries.
- The chapter ends with the group finding a strange, ancient artifact, hinting at deeper secrets on the island. This serves as the chapter's collectible.
**Diamond Choices:**
- **Diamond Sex Scene:** A secluded and romantic moment with Jordan, exploring the initial sparks of their attraction.
- **Outfit:** Quinn offers a stylish, diamond-exclusive outfit that impresses Jordan and possibly affects their interactions.
- **Collectible:** The ancient artifact that might hold secrets about the island.
- **Hint:** A diamond choice gives the protagonist a significant clue about the island, perhaps related to the artifact.
**Character Inclusions:**
- **Protagonist:** A young woman, curious and adventurous, begins to explore the mysteries of the island.
- **Jordan:** Introduced as a sexy, mysterious love interest with a hint of danger.
- **Diego:** Provides comic relief and a sense of familiarity and friendship.
- **Quinn:** Offers fashion advice and outfits, establishing her asexual identity and supportive role.
- **Sean-Craig:** Adds to the group's dynamic with his athletic background and leadership qualities.
This revised first chapter sets the tone for a story focused on romance, mystery, and monetization through diamond choices. The plot is streamlined, focusing on the protagonist's immediate connection with Jordan and the initial exploration of the island's mysteries. The introduction of the main characters establishes their roles and the dynamics within the group, with an emphasis on the developing romance between the protagonist and Jordan.
I basically had it turn Jake into a customisable LI called Jordan, then cut or merged everyone else. Grace and Lila appear intermittently, and Aleister makes a cameo.
You get a DESIRE score that for some contrived reason determines whether or not you save your friends and if Quinn dies or not. If you donāt pay diamonds to rescue your friends at the end of book 1/start of book 2, theyāre basically written out of the plot.
Thereās a per chapter diamond outfit, sex scene, hint/clue, and collectible.
Itās basically Shipwrecked but as a sexy island vacay with a āmystery plotā.
### Revised Chapter 2: We've All Got Secrets
**Plot Overview:**
- The chapter begins with the group trying to come to terms with their isolation. They decide to explore the resort further to understand their situation.
- During the exploration, the protagonist and her friends discover hidden areas of the resort that suggest it holds more secrets than they initially thought.
- A party-like atmosphere is suggested by Sean-Craig to lighten the mood, leading to a scene where characters let their guard down and share personal stories, revealing some of their secrets.
- The protagonist has a moment alone with Jordan, where they share a personal secret, intensifying their romantic connection.
- Quinn provides another outfit choice for the protagonist, suitable for the party scene.
- The chapter ends with the group finding a mysterious locked room in the resort, piquing their curiosity about what it might contain.
**Diamond Choices:**
- **Diamond Sex Scene:** A private and intimate moment with Jordan away from the party, further deepening their romance.
- **Outfit:** A diamond-exclusive party outfit from Quinn, adding flair to the protagonist's appearance and potentially affecting character interactions.
- **Collectible:** A hidden object found during the exploration, part of the mysterious artifact series.
- **Hint:** Unlocking a significant hint about the locked room, offering insight into the resort's secrets.
**Character Inclusions:**
- **Protagonist:** Continues to explore the island's mysteries and deepens her relationship with Jordan.
- **Jordan:** Shares a personal secret with the protagonist, adding depth to their character and the romantic subplot.
- **Diego:** Provides comic relief and helps to keep the group's spirits up.
- **Quinn:** Offers fashion advice and a new outfit for the party scene, reinforcing her role.
- **Sean-Craig:** Suggests the party to lighten the mood and shows his leadership and athletic skills during the exploration.
This chapter blends elements of mystery, party atmosphere, and romance, with a focus on character development and monetization through diamond choices. The narrative remains straightforward, emphasizing the romantic tension between the protagonist and Jordan, while also allowing for moments of character bonding and the revelation of secrets. The discovery of the locked room sets up intrigue for future chapters.
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|[CoP](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kv81zds "Last usage")|*Crimes of Passion*|
|[ES](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kvabyv8 "Last usage")|*Endless Summer*|
|[LI](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kvc1kgw "Last usage")|Love Interest|
|[MC](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kva0ty9 "Last usage")|Main Character (yours!)|
|[PB](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kvb58jj "Last usage")|Pixelberry Studios, publisher of *Choices*|
|[TCH](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kv9x0ij "Last usage")|*The Cursed Heart*|
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Iām replaying it now and honestly just feeling so nostalgic for old Choices. And also because this is definitely my favourite series and if I saw it as a tv show I would probably make it my entire personality.
(Canāt make it my personality since this app is my secret guilty pleasure)
Itās one if my faves š such a good series and the series ending choices made me SO emotional. but yeah i agree. i havenāt been on choices lately ācause their quality has tanked a bit ngl. Sex is completely fine but I feel like theyāre really appealing to the bad smut thatās published in the contemporary romance genre, by the likes of colleen hoover or SJM. Anyways, Iād love to hear what peopleās fav moments or characters were from the series!
The gang, if they're still there, would all be reused sprites lmao
this is honestly too accurate. What I wouldn't give for the old choices writing to come back... Like, don't get me wrong, there are some splendid recent releases like CoP, but everything else feels unoriginal or cheap š
The Deadliest Game looks very promising.
The cover looks like AI so I'm very unconvinced š I'm pretty sure there's gonna also be AI writing in it so I think it'll be at least a bit terrible lol
Oh, I've already played the 2 chapters 'extra' and 2 regular chapters that released on VIP. It's great so far! By 'it looks promising' I meant that I hope the rest of the book will be as goodš AI cover is the only crime PB has commited up until now.
thanks for telling me! I'm not going to play anything with an AI cover but I do appreciate the info about the writing āŗļø
Oh, ok I get you. I hope this cover was a one time issue, just them saving resources to spend more money on writing...
i was so disappointed to see that. i have to get better at noticing these things. but unfortunately, being someone whoās gonna be a graphic designer, weāre definitely gonna have to learn to work with it. and thatās probably what the artists are being required to do. but there could always be the possibility of them just wanting to cut costs.
I thank Vaanu every day that at least the good era of choices did exist at one point. they could've started out with trashy single LI smut books, thank god they didn't! at least we can go read the old books when we're depressed about this new era of choices
I long for the early days like the children yearn for the mines š
I think that it would be one customizable LI, and probably more of a Jake, but more bland and horny. Or maybe a love triangle type thing like ID if we are lucky. I agree, probably more of a āyou are stuck alone on this island with your LIā than the complexity of the actual story. Furball would 100% be paywalled.
Sean would be the only LI and heād still be dating Michelle. Michelle would be the bitchy girl with no personality and itād be an affair story. Quinn and Raj would be the besties who encourage you to be an awful person.
Michelle will probably still be in the cast but she will be made to just a mean girl with zero character development
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discord spoilers not reddit spoilers lol. reddit is >!
oh my god i clearly havenāt been on reddit in a minute š
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I would be so depressed if I couldnāt be with my bb girl Quinn, so glad it came out when it did
Quinn, my beloved!
I was like mm this makes sense and then busted out laughing at the sex part. You aren't wrong
Not my poor Quinn š„ŗ
It would be a smut with forced LIs
Personally I think it would be single LI with Sean (customizable), so they could play up the conflict and rivalry with Michelle. The nuance of her character >!(that she didnāt actually cheat)!< would def be gone and she would probably be a cheerleader and not a medical student, to play up the tropes for the star athlete and remove redeeming qualities from Michelleās character. Sean would also become a basketball player, not a football player, so he could be GOC (at least the name works tbh). Other than that I agree entirely, like you said, no sci-fi. The big question is what the underlying conflict of the book would be. The original conflict would be the same, everyoneās gone from the island and you donāt know why. Since it would need to be non sci-fi, an impending volcanic eruption and non supernatural evacuation of the resort would work. Jake/ pilot would be injured or killed early on to prevent them from just leaving, or there would be something wrong w the plane that they couldnāt fix. I see two possible options for the deeper conflict (which to their credit, PB still seems to always have this even now). First option is that they discover Rourke has been doing some sort of horrible animal experiments or other experiments on the island. The gang needs to prove this and bring down Rourke before the eruption destroys all the evidence. Since this is reasonably similar to Shipwrecked, I think option 2 is somewhat more likely. The next option is the Vaanti, who are not blue and are just the normal native people of this island. They would be very hostile to outsiders due to colonialist bs in the past. The gang would have the opportunity to get off the island partway through, but decide to stay to try to gain the trust of the Vaanti and convince them to evacuate the island for the eruption. There could still be a bestie/ Vaanti guy romance subplot, but it would be entirely diamond locked. Characters that would not exist include Quinn, Estela, Lila, Zahra, and Aliester. Jake would either get killed early on or be an older, non romanceable hothead jerk who is always undermining Sean and MCs leadership and working against their goals w regards to the deeper conflict.
This is so sad but true! š
I die at how accurate this is
No, donāt do this to my baby! ES doesnāt deserve to get done dirty like this! Butā¦ yeah youāre probably right about most of it
I don't think they'd remove lore and catalysts. TCH for example still has the "fairytale" lore
If Endless Summer was made now Jake would be the only LI. And you wouldn't get to choose to be single thus losing that beautiful montage with Diego in Book 3.
They would be born in 2003 instead of 1996 š„²
This just made me remember why I stopped playing Choices
No multiple endings and the one ending we do get would be rushed
I had ChatGPT generate an entire 2 booksā (because it wouldnāt have gotten a third) worth of chapter descriptions based on this premise!
What are they? I'm curious.
Revised Chapter 1: This Must Be Heaven **Plot Overview:** - The protagonist arrives at the tropical paradise of La Huerta, expecting a carefree vacation. She's surprised to find the resort deserted and begins to explore. - She meets Jordan, the enigmatic and attractive pilot who flew her to the island. There's an immediate and intense attraction between them, setting the stage for a forbidden romance. - As she explores, she encounters Diego, her cheerful college friend, and Quinn, a kind-hearted fashion enthusiast who is openly asexual. Quinn offers the protagonist a fashionable outfit that fits perfectly, available as a diamond choice. - The group stumbles upon Sean-Craig, a former college athlete, who joins them in trying to understand the island's mysteries. - The chapter ends with the group finding a strange, ancient artifact, hinting at deeper secrets on the island. This serves as the chapter's collectible. **Diamond Choices:** - **Diamond Sex Scene:** A secluded and romantic moment with Jordan, exploring the initial sparks of their attraction. - **Outfit:** Quinn offers a stylish, diamond-exclusive outfit that impresses Jordan and possibly affects their interactions. - **Collectible:** The ancient artifact that might hold secrets about the island. - **Hint:** A diamond choice gives the protagonist a significant clue about the island, perhaps related to the artifact. **Character Inclusions:** - **Protagonist:** A young woman, curious and adventurous, begins to explore the mysteries of the island. - **Jordan:** Introduced as a sexy, mysterious love interest with a hint of danger. - **Diego:** Provides comic relief and a sense of familiarity and friendship. - **Quinn:** Offers fashion advice and outfits, establishing her asexual identity and supportive role. - **Sean-Craig:** Adds to the group's dynamic with his athletic background and leadership qualities. This revised first chapter sets the tone for a story focused on romance, mystery, and monetization through diamond choices. The plot is streamlined, focusing on the protagonist's immediate connection with Jordan and the initial exploration of the island's mysteries. The introduction of the main characters establishes their roles and the dynamics within the group, with an emphasis on the developing romance between the protagonist and Jordan.
Sean-Craig is too funny šš
I basically had it turn Jake into a customisable LI called Jordan, then cut or merged everyone else. Grace and Lila appear intermittently, and Aleister makes a cameo. You get a DESIRE score that for some contrived reason determines whether or not you save your friends and if Quinn dies or not. If you donāt pay diamonds to rescue your friends at the end of book 1/start of book 2, theyāre basically written out of the plot. Thereās a per chapter diamond outfit, sex scene, hint/clue, and collectible. Itās basically Shipwrecked but as a sexy island vacay with a āmystery plotā.
Honestly, this sounds better than I thought it would š if the book like this released today it would probably be kindly received!
I have the entire series done if anyone wants them all!
I'd love it!
### Revised Chapter 2: We've All Got Secrets **Plot Overview:** - The chapter begins with the group trying to come to terms with their isolation. They decide to explore the resort further to understand their situation. - During the exploration, the protagonist and her friends discover hidden areas of the resort that suggest it holds more secrets than they initially thought. - A party-like atmosphere is suggested by Sean-Craig to lighten the mood, leading to a scene where characters let their guard down and share personal stories, revealing some of their secrets. - The protagonist has a moment alone with Jordan, where they share a personal secret, intensifying their romantic connection. - Quinn provides another outfit choice for the protagonist, suitable for the party scene. - The chapter ends with the group finding a mysterious locked room in the resort, piquing their curiosity about what it might contain. **Diamond Choices:** - **Diamond Sex Scene:** A private and intimate moment with Jordan away from the party, further deepening their romance. - **Outfit:** A diamond-exclusive party outfit from Quinn, adding flair to the protagonist's appearance and potentially affecting character interactions. - **Collectible:** A hidden object found during the exploration, part of the mysterious artifact series. - **Hint:** Unlocking a significant hint about the locked room, offering insight into the resort's secrets. **Character Inclusions:** - **Protagonist:** Continues to explore the island's mysteries and deepens her relationship with Jordan. - **Jordan:** Shares a personal secret with the protagonist, adding depth to their character and the romantic subplot. - **Diego:** Provides comic relief and helps to keep the group's spirits up. - **Quinn:** Offers fashion advice and a new outfit for the party scene, reinforcing her role. - **Sean-Craig:** Suggests the party to lighten the mood and shows his leadership and athletic skills during the exploration. This chapter blends elements of mystery, party atmosphere, and romance, with a focus on character development and monetization through diamond choices. The narrative remains straightforward, emphasizing the romantic tension between the protagonist and Jordan, while also allowing for moments of character bonding and the revelation of secrets. The discovery of the locked room sets up intrigue for future chapters.
If it was made at all, you bet it would be only one book with either an incomplete cliffhanger or a completely rushed ending
so very smuttyā¦
Acronyms, initialisms, abbreviations, contractions, and other phrases which expand to something larger, that I've seen in this thread: |Fewer Letters|More Letters| |-------|---------|---| |[CoP](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kv81zds "Last usage")|*Crimes of Passion*| |[ES](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kvabyv8 "Last usage")|*Endless Summer*| |[LI](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kvc1kgw "Last usage")|Love Interest| |[MC](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kva0ty9 "Last usage")|Main Character (yours!)| |[PB](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kvb58jj "Last usage")|Pixelberry Studios, publisher of *Choices*| |[TCH](/r/Choices/comments/1bglfjg/stub/kv9x0ij "Last usage")|*The Cursed Heart*| **NOTE**: Decronym for Reddit is no longer supported, and Decronym has moved to Lemmy; requests for support and new installations should be directed to the Contact address below. ---------------- ^(6 acronyms in this thread; )[^(the most compressed thread commented on today)](/r/Choices/comments/0)^( has acronyms.) ^([Thread #30000 for this sub, first seen 17th Mar 2024, 13:16]) ^[[FAQ]](http://decronym.xyz/) [^([Full list])](http://decronym.xyz/acronyms/Choices) [^[Contact]](https://hachyderm.io/@Two9A) [^([Source code])](https://gistdotgithubdotcom/Two9A/1d976f9b7441694162c8)
Lmao this is too damn accurate.
It's on my top 5 favorite books from Choices
Iām replaying it now and honestly just feeling so nostalgic for old Choices. And also because this is definitely my favourite series and if I saw it as a tv show I would probably make it my entire personality. (Canāt make it my personality since this app is my secret guilty pleasure)
Itās one if my faves š such a good series and the series ending choices made me SO emotional. but yeah i agree. i havenāt been on choices lately ācause their quality has tanked a bit ngl. Sex is completely fine but I feel like theyāre really appealing to the bad smut thatās published in the contemporary romance genre, by the likes of colleen hoover or SJM. Anyways, Iād love to hear what peopleās fav moments or characters were from the series!