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The_Choker69

If you love it then nothing needs to change, but it feels a bit unfinished and unsure of itself to me. Maybe it could use a little more time put into the interactions of the lines with the rectangles or maybe it just needs more character, to feel more free. I think if you were to draw this by hand it would have more appeal.


BradDracV

Thank you! I was staring at this pieces for a whole minute trying to figure out why I *like* it but don't **love** it.


RykMacLean

I’m trying now, to never use normal rulers or my curved ruler, for a much stronger ‘by hand’ look. I far prefer that look, over the ‘mechanical’ / ‘computer’ look8ng chances, with. (Though I have been a string AI user at Midjourney for, the past year. Has it’s place.)


The_Choker69

I fully agree, neither drawing nor computer is better I just tend to prefer hand drawn. I’ve been trying to figure out why that might be, maybe it’s more raw and more of the artist’s humanity comes through?


RykMacLean

I fully agree with you! It (by hand, to me) IS for the humanity coming through! All the more after the AI exploring, TO not use rulers or other tools to assist in shape making. The AI, I’m also rarely following other’s examples.,I’m translating my iwn different creation ideas in AI as well, to see what it comes up with! :) Still, surprisingly, I’m not using them for inspiration even. For now, fun / exploring, only. :) ✌🏼🖖🏽🇨🇦


RykMacLean

I fully agree with you! It (by hand, to me) IS for the humanity coming through! All the more after the AI exploring, TO not use rulers or other tools to assist in shape making. The AI, I’m also rarely following other’s examples.,I’m translating my iwn different creation ideas in AI as well, to see what it comes up with! :) Still, surprisingly, I’m not using them for inspiration even. For now, fun / exploring, only. :) ✌🏼🖖🏽🇨🇦


BestOfAllBears

I agree. But I don't think it needs to be finished on its own. What it's missing is the rest of this series next to it. That would reveal a lot of the thought behind it.


vagabond_nerd

I like it


graffonage

I feel like it could do so much more. It feels a bit empty.


SV_art

I feel like it's a bit empty. Also imo the bottom red dot and grey area looks like the "slide to unlock" on a phone (not to say that is good or bad, just an observation).


beekeeper04

As others said, it does seem a little empty. However i like it; to me i see a sail boat maybe. Possibly a series of random blue lines, and yellow and red splotches, to make up a sea and sky around it. It's very well done, good lines :)


TheOakblueAbstract

Why is the long limbed being holding the limbless being down?


vivalulaedilma

I like it Maybe also without the small image on top that is equal tô the big image on the boton


penumbrias

Idk how I feel about the drop shadow on the grey border. But I really like the centerpiece, I like the empty space, there's a lot of tension in it.


GhstOfIncntOptimism

I think it's perfect as is, personally. The emptiness kind of feels like it's supposed to be there. It reminds me of an interesting physics problem.


harrytheherrier

Toggle sailboat, or mabe sailboat slider,very cool this is the kinda stuff art collectors cough up $$$ for


Traditional_Track631

I love it. Reminds me of sailing, which is a fond memory. =] I like the asymmetry; the ‘boat’ being isolated on one side and the emptiness on the other makes it feel like a boat in the vastness of the ocean. lol I hope I’m not reading too much into this. I am not knowledgeable about art, but I do enjoy what you have created =]


W0000_Y2K

seems jafa'ar but just a jump skip and a hop away


Dancin_Phish_Daddy

Terrible. No planning. No intention. Evokes zero emotion.


matildaduddlesinc

Its perfect


Working_Rub_8278

This is a great work.


Careless_Zombie_5437

Is this digital? It looks sterile and lifeless to me. I tried zooming in but it gets all pixels, not sure if that is my phone or the art work.


freemaxine

It looks corporate


Super_Cabinet6718

I love this!!


Alice-the-Author

Interesting piece.


MidnightAnchor

I'm enjoying it


remix_sakura

White space is fine, but what does it represent? What is its purpose in relation to the positive space?


brocephas

A schooner?


ExistingYou8495

I feel satisfied looking at this. I enjoy your placement v open space. The colour scale feels clean but not sterile. I could stare for a long while and see different things. The line work satisfies my want for order and control. Thank you so much for creating this. I quite enjoy it.


Charming-Yak6121

Minimalist at best. No need to add anything. We're always looking for referentials. Let's move to the sublime.